The Songbird and the Rambutan Tree
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Lucille Abendanan has written 'The Songbird and the Rambutan Tree' which is based on a true story that took place during World War II. It is the story of Emmy and her friend Bakti and Violet a schoolmate. Lucille shared what she learned from her grandmother and hopes learning continues.
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Mark Graham
I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.
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I enjoy WWII books, and this one sounds like a good one.
Nice! I’d like a little more detail - maybe just one example - in your story (actually I think this community is specifically to ask other creators for a critique. I think Geeks is for reviews but it requires 600 words.) 🤗💕