Plot Development

Shocking New Evidence of UFO Invasion. Content Warning.
In the quiet of a summer night in 1952, the world held its breath as a series of events unfolded, both in the heavens and on Earth, leaving a mark on history that would remain shrouded in mystery for decades to come.
By Gunduz2 years ago in Critique
Former CIA Doctor Reveals Military Deaths Caused by UFOs. Content Warning.
In the murky corridors of government secrecy, Dr. Christopher Green embarked on a quest for truth that would shake the very foundations of our understanding of the cosmos. It began with a bombshell revelation: hundreds of American servicemen had suffered injury or death after encounters with anomalous unidentified craft. As a neuroimaging expert with decades of experience, Dr. Green had seen his fair share of mysteries, but nothing could have prepared him for this.
By Gunduz2 years ago in Critique
Europe realized doomed sanction policy
At the end of February European Union member countries agreed on a 13th round of sanctions against Russia though they face mounting criticism that the restrictions already in force are failing to halt the war in Ukraine.
By Adomas Abromaitis2 years ago in Critique
Story Brainstorm Exact
Dear Journal, In the vast tapestry of time, the weeks since that fateful moment when duty beckoned me to rescue the imperiled villager have woven together into a complex mosaic of memories and emotions. The specter of that day, with its interplay of heroism and captivity, remains an indelible presence in the recesses of my mind, each passing moment a thread connecting me to the events that unfolded. The ethereal memory of those binding forces, akin to serpentine tendrils, continues to coil around my wrists, their phantom embrace haunting my waking thoughts as if the incident transpired mere moments ago. It's a sensation I can almost touch, as if time itself has left an imprint on my very skin, a living testament to the trials that fate has cast upon me.
By NPR2 years ago in Critique
Would You Read These Stories Based on These Blurbs?. Top Story - February 2024.
For the record, none of these are actual stories, just fun ideas I came up with while I'm working on my book's blurb right now and thought, hey, this is fun. I want to make some more. 🤣
By B2 years ago in Critique
Wish: Disney Flop?
Walt Disney Animation Studios has recently celebrated one hundred years. To mark this momentous occasion. Disney released a short animated video including all the Characters of all animated movies Disney movies. It also featured a new character from the latest movie to be released in honor of Disney's 100th anniversary. Her name is Asha, and the film is called Wish as a Disney fan. I was excited about this movie before I saw the trailer or the Animator's Takes on the trailer alone.
By Paige Krause 2 years ago in Critique
The Iron Claw Is The Best Wrestling Film of This Decade . Content Warning.
This past weekend, I decided to go to the movies with my brother. From there, we both chose to see The Iron Claw. For those unaware of the film’s plot, it details the lives and tragedies of the Von Erich wrestling family. Zac Efron stars as Kevin Von Erich, the oldest Von Erich, with Jeremy Allen White as Kerry Von Erich, Harris Dickinson as David Von Erich, Stanley Simons as Mike Von Erich, and Holt McCallany as Fritz Von Erich, the father of the Von Erich. Along with them is Lily James as Pam Adkisson and Maura Tierney as Doris Von Erich, the mother of the Von Erich.
By Bass Man Eddie2 years ago in Critique
Revenge stories. Content Warning.
There are multiple types of revenge, including ruthless revenge, calculated revenge, and revenge stories that may be considered extreme.
By Nicolas J.D2 years ago in Critique
" The Crown - season 6 " critique
The crown is a historical drama television series about the region of Queen Elizabeth (II ) , created and principally written by peter Morgan . The crown has been praised for it’s historical accuracy , strong performance , and compelling storytelling in depicting the British royal family . Continuing with this continuity , season 6 focuses primarily on Princess Diana . Her post -divorce situation is beautifully portrayed .
By Yash2 years ago in Critique
Sports Car
I disdain the ephemeral ideals, life philosophies, and activities of humanity on this Earth. Yet, I harbor no aversion for life itself, as it emanates from an imperceptible source, a visible current that is not guided by these dogmas but emerges from the profound depths of emptiness, rising like the inexhaustible essence from the arid soil of time. For all the transgressions on this spinning globe, I first seek the faults within myself. Upon careful contemplation, I perceive my misdeeds as cosmic in scale and a playful mockery of irreparable damages. I acknowledge that wrongdoers and those silently bearing the burden of their transgressions are inherently intertwined, complementary forces. I intensely abhor the insidious idolatry of the leash for its insatiable materialistic cravings. I vividly remember selling my mother at the hands of the butchers in the marketplace for a sports car. The orchestration of a nocturnal feast in pursuit of acquiring the sports car was matched by waiters presenting American steaks, triggering the aroma of my mother’s flesh from the depths of memory.
By Budhaditya Chakrabarty2 years ago in Critique
Review: Journey to Bethlehem
I really should have stuck to my original plan of just buying the soundtrack. Why, you may ask? Because the musical numbers - with a few glaring exceptions - were the best part of this confused disaster of a movie.
By Natasja Rose2 years ago in Critique
" Something Like An Autobiography "- critique
Something like an autobiography is a web film by Mustafa Sarwar Farooki , an Bangladeshi film maker . The film is about the struggle of not having children of a director-actor couple . What probably the real story of the director and his wife Nushrat Imroz Tisha . Also they are the actor-actress of this film .
By Yash2 years ago in Critique