Novel

Who even cares who John Galt is?
Rand’s masterpiece of the human spirit, “Atlas Shrugged,” demonstrated that I can both appreciate the strength of writing while fundamentally disagreeing with the core philosophy of the work. The brutal entanglement of individual happiness and productivity miss the mark on the true beauty of the human spirit - boundless kindness.
By Colton Babladelis2 years ago in Critique
The STAND- more than a simple tale of Good vs Evil
Dark dreams haunt the minds of survivors, in this plague filled post apocalyptic thriller. Forcing the remaining individuals to choose between Good and Evil. This novel challenges you the reader to ask yourself, would you follow the Dark man or fight on the side the Light...
By JBaz2 years ago in Critique
What to expect of "Great Expectations"
A timeless story, told through the perspective of our protagonist Pip, about how are actions, no matter how small or large have lasting consequences. This classic reminds us, to great effect, how small the world can be and how inextricably woven all of stories are to our everyone around us.
By Tyler C Douglas2 years ago in Critique
Vocal
You weren’t my first. Probably not my last. But of all the others' past, you’re the one that’s lasted. Vocal, you’re the best writing platform I have found so far. You’ve helped me grow. You’ve made me mad. You’ve made me smile. You’ve made me the writer I am today.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
A Song of Ice and Fire - A Throne in My Side
The enormous popularity of HBO’s Game of Thrones led many to believe that the source material — the book series A Song of Ice and Fire by George R.R. Martin — must be even better. It's not. All subtlety and character depth were creations of the show’s writers and actors.
By Scott C Lillard2 years ago in Critique
The Lord of the Rings and Women
It changed the course of fantasy representation and story telling with beautiful scenes and compelling heroes in a traditional tale of good conquering evil. It was the story of a great quest, best friends, and war. It had everything yet still lacked strong female characters and representation. Another Bechdel failed.
By Laura Lann2 years ago in Critique
The Old Man and the Sea. Top Story - August 2023.
An old man, a sea A weathered determination A journey taken, a boat worn DiMaggio in newspaper pages Three days fishing, a Marlin
By The Invisible Writer2 years ago in Critique
Normal People
Against rolling Irish hills and freshly-washed linens, Marianne and Connell touch and love and part and chase and fail. Their minds and bodies are ravenous, their souls and tongues damaged. They leave me wanting more.
By Suze Kay2 years ago in Critique
Oh My God, What For, My Eyes!
In my tiny belfry, I stare at a fly, Slyly landing, On foody panoply. Funny fucking fly. If I killed him, though, I surely would cry.
By Brent Tharp2 years ago in Critique
"The Heat of the Day" by Elizabeth Bowen
"The Heat of the Day" by Elizabeth Bowen masterfully blends wartime intrigue and emotional intricacies. It’s slow pace may test some readers' patience. Bowen's characters possess depth, crafting a mesmerizing narrative that immerses readers in its evocative setting. Overall, a gripping portrayal of love and espionage during World War II.
By UNpretentious2 years ago in Critique
Jane Eyre - the great book about terrible person
Main heroine is actually selfish and haughty person who agrees love only after her beloved man became depended on her. She was not able to accept relationship with Rochester while he was richer, prettier, socially superior to her. And such relationship is generally toxic as they depend on partner's status.
By Olga Moyseyenko2 years ago in Critique
Fairytale by Stephen King
Aș per true King fashion, his creation of world and characters is vivid and enticing. Disappointingly, he writes to an obvious Young Adult trope and story structure, leading to an unsatisfactory story and ending. I ask, where’s the heart? What’s the point? Not a great use of my time. Unexpected.
By KJ Aartila2 years ago in Critique