Fiction
Vocal
You weren’t my first. Probably not my last. But of all the others' past, you’re the one that’s lasted. Vocal, you’re the best writing platform I have found so far. You’ve helped me grow. You’ve made me mad. You’ve made me smile. You’ve made me the writer I am today.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
A Song of Ice and Fire - A Throne in My Side
The enormous popularity of HBO’s Game of Thrones led many to believe that the source material — the book series A Song of Ice and Fire by George R.R. Martin — must be even better. It's not. All subtlety and character depth were creations of the show’s writers and actors.
By Scott C Lillard2 years ago in Critique
Mitigating Circumstances, a Critique
An international crime syndicate takes over a pharmaceutical company to produce a highly addictive drug. Several board members block its release. They hire male and female assassins to eliminate the troublemakers. The assassins use a motorcoach tour to move from city to city. Mitigating Circumstances disrupt their murderous plans.
By Mark Gagnon2 years ago in Critique
Wanderer & The Owlves
Chapter Two Summoning
By Isaac Lawrence2 years ago in Critique
Disneys Musical Into The Woods
A cast of big BIG Hollywood names fill the roles for Disney’s Into The Woods musical film, which sings to us a tale of many fairytales when they are mixed together and collide. This musical piece will make you laugh, cry, yearn and connect with characters as their stories intersect.
By Hope Martin2 years ago in Critique
Nintendo Switches “Stray Gods”
”Strays Gods The Roleplaying Musical” for Nintendo Switch is a masterpiece of an animated, roleplaying “choose your own ending” game that will have you falling in love with a fresh take on Greek Mythology. The music is so artfully written and it’ll have you singing song while you are playing!
By Hope Martin2 years ago in Critique
The Warriors
Without question the best, nearly perfect video games I've ever played. For a game that was released before individual fingers were rendered, this is game is nearly perfect. A great way to expand on and honor the original source material. My only critique, this game should've way been more open-world.
By Dyllon Rodillon2 years ago in Critique








