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The Queen of Thieves
Johan Rundbery and A.A. Prime created a novel entitled 'The Queen of Thieves' a past of 'the Moonwind Mysteries' series. In this story Mika has some adjustments to make in her environment and to be able to help her friends find a forever home after solving a case with Valdemar.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Looking Up
Stephan Patis has written a story of home and friends and what is really important to understand about oneself. This a story of a young girl who just wants to help anything and anyone, but really just needs to learn how to make friends with kids and adults in town.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Puppets of Spelhorst A Norendy Tale
Kate DiCamillo and Julie Marstad has created a youth story entitled 'The Puppets of Spelhorst'. This is a story of how five puppets who share their thoughts on how they got on a certain mantel and how to deal with various issues and to discover our purpose for being here.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Frankie and Friends Breaking News Book One
Christine Platt and Alea Marley has created beginning chapter book for young readers that is all about learning about career. This one is about Frankie learning about her mother's career and wondering about what she actually does when she leaves them for a few days. This is series of books.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Search for the Lost Crystals
Joanna LeCuyer and David Girard has created a youth novel about a boy named Josh and his love for of video games. One day he received a new game, and he needs to figure out how to start playing till one night he checked and, in a blink, he's gone.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Louder Than Hunger
John Schu has written a youth book entitled "Louder Than Hunger' and it is the story about a boy named Jake who is dealing with various issues and learning how to deal with them and the people that are trying to help him to cope and survive what is happening.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Guardians of Time: Secret of the Lost Dragon Book Two
Phyllis Wheeler and Vitoria Gurgel has created 'Guardians of Time: Secret of the Lost Dragon' but this time it is about Jake and Ava and their young cousin DeeDee, a toddler. It starts with DeeDee picking up a strange coin and their adventure through time will begin the search for...
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Guardians of Time: 'The Dog Snatcher' Book One
Phyllis Wheeler and Katie O'Malley have created a youth book for anyone who has owned a pet of any kind. This is the story of a boy named Jake and his sister and their pet. Nicky is the focus of this story and an adventure is about to begin now.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Snicket #13
Lemony Snicket has written the end of the story of the Baudelaire's entitled 'The End'. The story starts when Violet, Klaus and Sunny are on a somewhat boat adrift on the ocean landing on an island of calm under the rule of a man having a set of clay feet.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Snicket #12
Lemony Snicket has completed #12 'The Penultimate Peril' that puts the Baudelaire's working at the Hotel Denouement as concierges. These three children that are growing up will bump into several well-known characters from their past while thinking what is the truth of what is going on all these years gone.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Eroding Trust: Kenya’s Governance Challenges
Political disillusionment is not unique to any one country. Across continents, citizens are losing faith in leadership as corruption, authoritarian tendencies, and mismanagement take center stage. South Korea’s recent political turmoil following the controversial imposition of martial law echoes frustrations felt in Kenya, where governance has seemingly prioritized elite interests over the people's well-being. Both cases highlight a deepening crisis of leadership, corruption, and eroded trust, underscoring the urgent need for systemic reform.
By Bryan Wafulaabout a year ago in Critique
A Sad and Happy Thanksgiving
The dinner is ready, and no one showed up. You wonder why, but you have no answer. No one had to bring anything you had the main course and all the sides of a variety as well as all kinds of desserts and drinks. No one calls either. You begin to wonder again and check your phone for any messages and still nothing. You decide to go ahead and make your own Thanksgiving plate and say a prayer of grace and thanksgiving for one did show up for he is the Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Happy Thanksgiving to me.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique