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City Attorney's Office
Christopher J. Stockwell has written an adult novel entitled 'City Attorney's Office' which is book one of Professional Camoflage. This is the story of a man named Ben and his foray into the world of law and a person that good luck just seems to follow. Decisions will be made.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Shoes Mara Finds Her Passion
Maria G Di Zio Vomiero has written her first book entitled 'The Shoes Mara Finds Her Passion. This is the story of a little girl who has a choice to make between two activities that she likes. This is book one of a series. Mara has a decision to make.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Songbird and the Rambutan Tree
Lucille Abendanan has written 'The Songbird and the Rambutan Tree' which is based on a true story that took place during World War II. It is the story of Emmy and her friend Bakti and Violet a schoolmate. Lucille shared what she learned from her grandmother and hopes learning continues.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
River of Crows
N.P. Thompson has written book one of The Arcanium 'River of Crows' a fantasy story of magical over mortal ways in dealing with school issues like bullying. The main characters of Ty and Ayslenne will they work out their various issues at school and home with their powers to survive.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
The Raven's Crux
'The Raven's Crux' written by Julie Boglisch is a mystery/ghost story for all ages for the characters have to learn how to be safe around certain entities. Julie has written a book that will have the reader wondering if ghosts are real and can help whenever we may need help.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Ventura and Winnetka
J.G. Bryan has written a young adult novel that I think adults would like too. It is entitled 'Ventura and Winnetka'. This is the story of five friends living their Senior year in high school growing up and learning who they are and what they may become in living life.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
A Christmas Wish Under the Desert Stars
The desert seemed endless, its golden dunes glowing with the sunset's last rays. As the night drew in, a sea of stars twinkled overhead, and their light reflected on the sand in a way that seemed to make the whole scene magical. For Amira, this was home, but tonight, it felt different. It was Christmas Eve, a holiday not usually commemorated in her small desert village, hidden away deep within the Sahara. Yet, something inside of her stirred-a wish she carried deep within her heart.
By Usman Zafarabout a year ago in Critique
McKenzie: a novel and incantation
At night, Paulina’s ghost came and sat a while, chin on her rough linen dress, on the floor of the theater. She watched as the wooden framework of the set grew up around her, until one Tuesday night the actors would take the stage for rehearsals, when the world of the play would blossom and she could live among men for a time.
By Saint Fearabout a year ago in Critique
Another new room
A new room a starting point to begin anew.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
A New Room
How do you see this room? A new year is starting soon and it's a time to start fresh. So, in this empty room I see plenty of bookshelves and a big comfy chair of some kind. There will be one big, braided rug of either shades of browns or blues or even greens not sure yet along with a few scatter rugs for effect. There will be a floor lamp behind the comfy chair and maybe an ottoman in front of the chair. I am thinking blue or green curtains. How's that for a new room and new year.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
