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Germany, France, and Poland Unite in Berlin to Address Ukraine Crisis
In an effort to demonstrate a unified stance toward Ukraine, leaders from Germany, France, and Poland have convened in Berlin for an emergency meeting. The purpose of the meeting is to address the divergent policies of France and Germany when it comes to supporting Ukraine's defense. This gathering is seen as an opportunity to coordinate their efforts and present a cohesive front amidst increasing concerns regarding Russian aggression in the region.
By Jordan Bailey2 years ago in Critique
Gunman Convicted of Manslaughter: A Moment of Accountability
In a landmark ruling, the father of a teenager responsible for a deadly school shooting in Michigan has been found guilty of involuntary manslaughter. The jury determined that James Crumbley had partial responsibility for providing his son, Ethan, access to the firearm used in the attack. This conviction marks a significant step towards holding parents accountable for their role in such tragic events.
By Jordan Bailey2 years ago in Critique
China's diplomatic strategy and humanitarian care in the northern Myanmar conflict
China's diplomatic strategy and humanitarian care in the northern Myanmar conflict
By Anita Bertelsen2 years ago in Critique
Story Brainstorm Exact
Dear Journal, In the vast tapestry of time, the weeks since that fateful moment when duty beckoned me to rescue the imperiled villager have woven together into a complex mosaic of memories and emotions. The specter of that day, with its interplay of heroism and captivity, remains an indelible presence in the recesses of my mind, each passing moment a thread connecting me to the events that unfolded. The ethereal memory of those binding forces, akin to serpentine tendrils, continues to coil around my wrists, their phantom embrace haunting my waking thoughts as if the incident transpired mere moments ago. It's a sensation I can almost touch, as if time itself has left an imprint on my very skin, a living testament to the trials that fate has cast upon me.
By NPR2 years ago in Critique
Would You Read These Stories Based on These Blurbs?. Top Story - February 2024.
For the record, none of these are actual stories, just fun ideas I came up with while I'm working on my book's blurb right now and thought, hey, this is fun. I want to make some more. 🤣
By B2 years ago in Critique
Our Body Others Opinion
Body-shaming is not two different words it is the full sentence for those people who criticize people who don’t have perfect body shape or posture.
By Navneet Kumar Jha2 years ago in Critique
Dear Vocal pt. 2 (2024)
Hey there Vocal, you may not remember me. I first wrote this article. You don't necessarily have to read it. In summary I asked you guys to either make the following communities or make them tags: Asian dramas(k-drama, j-drama, c-drama etc), otakus(anime) and Sims lit(- stories made by simmers.)
By BBW2 years ago in Critique
Baptized By Fire. Content Warning.
My lungs burn with every inhale I take. I don't have a destination, but I know staying put means certain death. It was after midnight, and I was casually driving along the dark, deserted highway, Lana Del Rey playing in the background, when an unexpected emergency alert went off. I spared a quick glance at my cell, annoyed at the interruption, but then I saw the word 'ATTACK' flash across the screen, and my heart skidded to a halt.
By B2 years ago in Critique
Critiques Needed: First pages of Project Styx. Top Story - January 2024. Content Warning.
Authors note: I would like constructive critiques on the first pages of a sci-fi fantasy book I am working on. I would like to know first impressions and things that need to be worked on. This is so I can get an idea of what an agent or editor might think. I also know that this is long—no need to read the whole thing, in fact, tell me when you lose interest.
By K. Kocheryan2 years ago in Critique
Rajasthan Election Results 2023: BJP Emerges Victorious with 109 Seats; Ashok Gehlot Tenders Resignation - LIVE Updates. Content Warning.
In a riveting turn of events, the Rajasthan Election Results 2023 have unfolded with unprecedented drama and anticipation. The BJP has secured a commanding victory, winning 109 seats and leading in six others. The political landscape of the state is undergoing a seismic shift as Ashok Gehlot, the incumbent Chief Minister, tenders his resignation. This blog post aims to provide a comprehensive overview of the unfolding events, offering real-time updates on the Rajasthan Election Results 2023.
By Debjit Das2 years ago in Critique
Mad Woman
The seat was cold and hard; the wood was worn where others before me had taken the stand. The weight of the eyes on me was suffocating, all these people here and I didn’t know a single one, but they all knew me.
By Kelsey Winds2 years ago in Critique
Untitled Rough Drafter I'm Calling it "Part 2 Draft"
Some would say I made my bed it’s time I lie in it. Some would say, what I did I had every tragic thing done to me coming. This is in the mind of a survivor, I could hear the crashing waves as my eyes flutter open. I look over as I feel his warm body holding me I knew this felt right I just didn’t want to admit it. He isn’t married but you slept with your best friend’s boyfriend. I try to rationalise this, but it is impossible. I look into his eyes holding his cheek pondering how can something that should be wrong feel so right.
By Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)2 years ago in Critique