Twisted modern day Cinderella story. Slow paced 1876 meets noisy fast 2000 by way of a time portal. The Duke is the prince. He is besotted with the advertising executive. Romance! Will it end?
Instead of a lost slipper at midnight, the Duke names his wife to be.
Music, waltzing!
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
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Comments (33)
Excellent! And congrats on TS. Keep on keeping on, Babs!
You had me at Waltzing <3. Such a beautiful review.
Lovely critique. I’m always suckered into watching this if I catch it on :). Congratulations on Top Story :)
Well done Babs and congratulations on the top story!
Loved this.
Congrats on top story!! :) Well deserved, great critique.
Aww well done Babs on this, and on Top Story 🥰❤️✨
I haven’t seen this movie, but your review here makes me think that I should!
great critique
A romantic classic. Saw it years ago ❤️ Lovely review and congratulations on Top story ❤️
Congrats on top story, Babs! I'm not familiar with this story but you make me want to see it! Can't pass up a good romance!
Haven't heard of it but nice critique
Sounds lavish and romantic! Great review, Babs! and congrats!
Ah, yes. Pam loved it, which means I've had to watch it 3 times. It is a cute story and your critique is perfect. Great job, Babs and congratulations on Top Story!
Congrats on the TS.
When you say will it end, do you kean the romance, or the film? Sounds fun, I might watch. Assuming it's the former.
I loved this movie. Well done Babs
Succinct and lovely-congrats on TS!
You have piqued my interest, I will have to check this out.
I haven't seen this movie, but did find the concept and trailer interesting...now as well as your critique. Congratulations on Top Story!
Not seen the film, but have heard of it. Love this critique and congrats on Top Story!
Nicely done!
Omgggg, I have to watch this! Thank you so much for writing about this movie!
Excellent critique 🥰💓💗Love this Romantic story . Meg Ryan is such a great actress
Amazing review ❤️👌💯😉📝❗