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HORRIBLE CIRCUTANSES ...

BAD DAY

By MURUGESAN PONRAJPublished 2 years ago 2 min read

A dark Night Heavy snow was Covered. My Hands and feet were frozen like a ice, I was ok off my both gloves because I couldn't stand alone the cold. Severe shivering inside and outside of the my body. .I was entered the loins and walked slowly to keep some kind of moisture soaking in the body.The place and time I was entered had an eerie feel to it.I could hear my footsteps were ouder with every step I took.Silence- A thousand people in the world are shouting around us, one can easily remain as a single human being only there. But silent situations are created to test the human being. In one's mind, all courage becomes a question mark- makes it !! It is the brute nature of peace.I was entered the dark room. No outside air came in. Here and there, many dead bodies were placed on upside he seats. There was no movement. The noise of the silence was very loud.One by one I was passed the corpses that were placed. There was a kind of tension in my mind. Only on my eyelids moved. The head did not move. In God's creation, every human being is unique. The same in features and the same in appearance. One with dark complexion, one with solid body, long nose, beautiful eyes, slim body, One by one with a thick moustache, one with long hair, and one with a shaved head on one side, the corpses were placed in such a manner that I was passed by one by one, increasing my morale.How everything would have been outside.Come here and be like this.My chest was pounding. I could see only one similarity in the sittings. The head part of all was swollen and it presented a slightly terrifying sight.I watched and took each step.. I could not resist the cold and the tension of the situation and suddenly sat still, my wristwatch, is on the wires, made a sound "Dinkkkkk".Suddenly three corpses opened their eyes. Sharp eyes fell on me and I froze for a second. I was idn't get up. Words didn't join. Their bodies didn't move at all. But their eyes were fixed on me like daggers. Unable to bear the intensity of the gaze, my eyelids was fell down and they are closed their eyes again.Throat was dry.I needed water.But I didn't have it.No one to ask around,no human traffic.I was drowned in saliva.I thought for a moment. To deal with such situations, it is only possible if I go through them. I was looked closely at what was in front of me. "It is a right to face you in your own way." I thought for a moment. To deal with such situations, it is only possible if I am go through them. I was looked closely at what was in front of me. "It is right to face you in your own way."Eyes were losed...my world went dark suddenly a polite voice..."Thank you for Traveling with Great Western Railways you reached your destiny".I was oke up startled. "Sir, have we reached the alighting station? Good luck, have you woken up?"After thanking that Automated Announcer sister, I was ook off the OVER EAR BLUETOOTH HEADPHONES stuck in my ears and kept them in my bag

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