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The Mystery of the Wooden Chest

A picnic turns into a dangerous adventure when three friends uncover a smuggling secret hidden in the mountains.

By Khan Published 4 months ago 4 min read


The Secret of the Wooden Chest

BY:Khan

It was a holiday afternoon. My two friends and I had decided to spend the day picnicking by a mountain stream. The monsoon rains had been pouring for two days straight, and the once calm stream had now turned into a roaring, muddy torrent. Despite the danger, the thrill of adventure pulled us in, and we waded into the water, splashing and laughing.

The current was fierce, and from the mountains above, the floodwaters carried down broken branches, dried wood, and even fruit-laden twigs. We cheered each time something unusual floated past. Suddenly, a large bundle of leaves and branches drifted toward us. It looked different—more compact, almost as if it were hiding something. Excited, we rushed to grab it and dragged it to the bank.

To our astonishment, beneath the tangle of branches lay a small wooden chest, carefully camouflaged. The branches were tied around it so cleverly that from afar it looked like nothing more than floating debris. We glanced at each other with wide eyes, curiosity surging. What could be inside this mysterious chest?

But before we could lift the lid, three men with terrifying faces appeared from behind the bushes.

“Stop! Don’t open it!” one of them barked in a voice that shook our hearts.

We froze. One man lunged forward, snatched the chest from our hands, and stepped back. He seemed to be the leader, for the others waited for his signal.

“Let’s go,” the leader ordered curtly.

“But boss,” the one holding the chest said nervously, “the boys saw it. They know.”

The leader’s eyes narrowed. He hesitated, then replied, “Fine. Lock them in the cave.”

Before we could even react, the men pushed us toward a nearby rocky hill. A small cave yawned at its base. They shoved us inside and rolled a massive stone over the entrance.

“You stay silent for half an hour,” the leader warned, pointing a gun at us. “Make a sound, and you won’t live to regret it.”

Terrified, we sat trembling in the dark cave. Luckily, there was a small gap between the rock and the cave’s mouth that allowed us to breathe and see outside. For half an hour, we whispered prayers. When silence settled outside, we tried moving the stone. It was too heavy. Finally, we shouted for help.

A passing farmer heard us and rushed to our aid. With the help of others, he rolled the stone aside and freed us. Out of fear, we didn’t reveal the truth about the chest or the men. Instead, we muttered, “We were playing, and a stone rolled down, trapping us.”

Our picnic was ruined, but the mystery of the chest haunted us.

The following Sunday, we returned to the mountain slope. This time, we sat a little away from the stream, pretending to play but keeping our eyes sharp. As the afternoon sun dipped low, Ahmed suddenly shouted, “Look! There it is again!”

Floating down the stream was another branch-covered bundle.

“Hide!” hissed Hisham.

We crouched under the rocky overhang, peering out. From behind the bushes, the same three men appeared. One jumped into the water, retrieved the bundle, and carried it to the bank. Moments later, they loaded the chest into a jeep and drove off.

“This is serious,” Ahmed whispered. “They must be criminals. No ordinary man hides a chest like that.”

“Let’s tell the police,” I said firmly.

We hurried up to a small police outpost on a nearby hill and explained everything. The inspector listened intently, exchanged looks with his colleagues, and nodded. “Thank you, boys,” he said, sending us back with a pat on the shoulder.

But we weren’t done yet.

The next Sunday, once again, we set up our “play spot” near the slope, waiting. We pretended to skip stones and joke around, but our eyes scanned the bushes.

Suddenly, a harsh voice thundered behind us.

“You again!”

We spun around. It was the gang’s leader, his eyes blazing with fury. “You meddling brats won’t escape this time.” He pulled a pistol from his coat. “Hands up!”

Just then, another voice rang out.

“Drop your weapon!”

We turned to see three policemen emerging with rifles raised. Startled, the leader swung his pistol toward them, but before he could fire, a sharp crack echoed. A bullet struck his hand, sending his gun clattering to the ground. He screamed, clutching his bleeding wrist.

The other two men, who had just dragged another chest from the stream, tried to flee. But the inspector shouted, “Stop! You’re surrounded.”

We looked up to see more policemen stationed on the ridge above, rifles aimed directly at the gang. Trapped, the smugglers froze. Within minutes, a full squad arrived and arrested them.

Later, we learned the shocking truth. This was a smuggling ring that had been operating for months. Their partners across the border packed contraband into wooden chests, camouflaged them with branches, and released them into the stream. The local gang collected the floating chests and transported them further. It was an ingenious trick, exploiting the raging mountain waters to bypass border patrols.

But in the end, their clever scheme failed. Their greed had led them back to the same stream again and again, and three curious boys had stumbled upon their secret.

As we walked home that evening, our hearts still pounding, I thought about how a simple picnic had turned into an adventure we would never forget.

We had uncovered a crime, faced danger, and witnessed justice unfold before our eyes.

And though our first picnic had been ruined, the memory of that mysterious wooden chest became the most unforgettable story of our lives.

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