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The Ghost of Highway 10

They murdered my mother twenty years ago. Tonight, I start collecting the debt.

By Wesley ThornePublished 5 months ago 4 min read
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The desert night on Interstate 10 is a lonely place. For truckers like Ricky Vargas, it was just another long haul, the hypnotic drone of the engine and the endless stretch of asphalt his only companions. He was moving a shipment of heroin for a powerful syndicate, a job he’d done a hundred times. But tonight was different. Tonight, he had an appointment with The Ghost.

A text message glowed on his phone: “Mile marker 70. Abandoned warehouse. Come alone.”

Ricky felt a knot tighten in his stomach. The Ghost was a legend in the underworld, a phantom fixer who, for an exorbitant price, guaranteed safe passage through police checkpoints. Ricky had never met him, but his bosses insisted. Recent close calls had made them nervous.

He pulled his semi-truck into the dusty lot of the derelict building. The air was still and hot. Inside, a silhouette emerged from the shadows. The man was young, athletic, dressed in black. He stood in silence, his eyes scanning Ricky from head to toe with an unnerving intensity.

"We moving soon?" Ricky asked, his voice rough.

The young man smiled, a cold, thin line. "In a minute. Just taking care of something." He vanished back into the darkness.

Ricky pulled out a cigarette, his hands trembling slightly. He checked his phone again and saw another message, one he’d missed, from a different number. “This is The Ghost. I’m waiting at mile marker 85. Where are you?”

Ice flooded Ricky’s veins. The man in the warehouse wasn't The Ghost. It was a trap. He spun around, scrambling for the door, but it was too late. A crushing blow from a heavy iron pipe sent him sprawling to the concrete floor.

The impostor stood over him, his face no longer calm, but a mask of cold fury.

"Twenty years ago, Ricky," the man whispered, his voice dangerously low. "Twenty years ago, you and four others killed a woman named Maria Reyes. You remember her? The woman who worked for your crew until she found out too much. The woman you butchered in front of her three-year-old son."

Ricky’s eyes widened in terror.

"You thought the boy would forget," the man continued, pulling a long, thin knife from his jacket. "He didn't. He grew up. And now, he's here to collect a debt. You're the first of five. The others will follow. Tell them... I'm coming."

Detective Leo Cole arrived at the scene just before dawn. His best friend and the county’s lead medical examiner, Dr. Ben Carter, was already there, kneeling by the body.

"Personal, Leo," Ben said without looking up. "Five stab wounds, precise and deep. The pipe was just to incapacitate him. The killer wanted him to be awake for this."

The crime scene was unnervingly clean. No fingerprints, no fibers, nothing. This wasn't a drug deal gone wrong; it was a professional hit. In the victim's truck, they found millions of dollars' worth of heroin, untouched. This wasn't about money. It was about revenge.

The victim’s phone gave them their first real lead. The two text messages. Two ghosts. One real, one fake. "Our killer is smart," Leo said, looking at the messages. "He impersonated a phantom to lure our victim into a trap."

The case quickly escalated. A few days later, a prominent neurosurgeon, Dr. Alan Shaw, was found murdered in his pristine clinic. Five stab wounds. The same clean crime scene. Leo dug into the doctor's past and found a sealed juvenile record. Twenty years ago, Dr. Shaw was part of a small-time gang. One of his associates? A young Ricky Vargas.

"We have a list," Leo realized, staring at the murder board. A pattern was emerging. A ghost was hunting down the members of an old crew, one by one. Using the dead doctor’s secret, encrypted phone, they found three more names: Hector Diaz, "Slick" Jimmy Russo, and a woman named Theresa.

It became a frantic race against time. They had the names, but no addresses, no current locations. They were hunting for ghosts being hunted by another ghost.

Hector Diaz, a trucking accountant, was next. Then Jimmy Russo, a loan shark. Both were found with five stab wounds. Both scenes were scrubbed clean. Only Theresa remained.

She walked into Leo’s precinct on her own, a woman in her late fifties, her face etched with a fear that had been brewing for two decades. "I know who's next," she said, her voice shaking. "It's me. And I know who's doing it. It's Maria's boy."

Theresa confessed everything. She was the one who had lured Maria Reyes to the warehouse all those years ago. She detailed the brutal murder, how they had killed her in front of her son. "We just left him there," she cried. "A little boy, alone with... with that."

"We can protect you, Theresa," Leo said. "But you have to help us catch him."

They set a trap. Using Theresa as bait, they staged a meeting in the same abandoned warehouse where it all began. The night was cold, the desert wind whistling through the broken windows. Theresa sat inside, a wire hidden under her coat, her heart pounding a frantic rhythm.

Hours passed. Then, a shadow fell across the doorway. A figure in black, moving with silent grace. He entered, his eyes locking onto Theresa. He didn't speak. He just started walking towards her, the same thin knife appearing in his hand.

"Police! Freeze!" Leo’s voice boomed from the darkness.

The Ghost didn't flinch. He didn't run. He simply stopped, let the knife clatter to the floor, and raised his hands. He looked at Leo, his young face a mask of weary resignation, as if he knew this was always how his story would end.

In the interrogation room, he spoke only one sentence. "I didn't forget."

The trial was a formality. He was convicted, a life sentence for a life of vengeance. As they led him away, Detective Cole looked at the case file, at the photo of a smiling Maria Reyes and her little boy. He had stopped a killer, but he knew he hadn't stopped a ghost. That ghost would haunt the halls of justice forever, a chilling reminder that some wounds never heal, and some debts are only ever paid in blood.

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About the Creator

Wesley Thorne

I'm Wesley Thorne. I write to explore one question: why do good people do terrible things? Here, you'll find stories of the darkness hiding in plain sight.

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