Criminal logo

The Forgotten Vault

Unearthing Secrets and Confronting Shadows

By Salamullah KhattiPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
picture credit to marek piwnicki on unspash

THE WIND HOWLED THROUGH THE ANCIENT TREES, WHISPERING SECRETS OF THE PAST. THE MOON CAST AN EERIE GLOW OVER THE DECAYING MANSION, STANDING TALL AND DESOLATE ON THE HILL. ITS NAME WAS BLACKTHORN MANOR, A PLACE SHROUDED IN MYSTERY AND DARKNESS. LEGEND HAD IT THAT A FORGOTTEN VAULT LAY HIDDEN WITHIN ITS DEPTHS, HOLDING A TREASURE BEYOND IMAGINATION. MANY HAD VENTURED TO UNCOVER ITS SECRETS, BUT NONE HAD RETURNED.

AMONG THOSE INTRIGUED BY THE TALES WAS A YOUNG WOMAN NAMED AMELIA HARTLEY. SHE HAD ALWAYS BEEN DRAWN TO THE UNKNOWN, SEEKING ADVENTURE AND THRILL. WITH A HEART FULL OF CURIOSITY AND A MIND BRIMMING WITH DETERMINATION, SHE DECIDED TO EMBARK ON A JOURNEY TO BLACKTHORN MANOR, DETERMINED TO UNVEIL THE TRUTH.

AS AMELIA STEPPED THROUGH THE CREAKING DOORS, THE AIR GREW HEAVY WITH ANTICIPATION. SHE CAUTIOUSLY EXPLORED THE GRAND FOYER, THE MARBLE FLOORS COLD UNDER HER FEET. PAINTINGS OF STERN-FACED ANCESTORS LINED THE WALLS, THEIR EYES SEEMINGLY FOLLOWING HER EVERY MOVE. IGNORING THE FEELING OF UNEASE, AMELIA PRESSED FORWARD, GUIDED BY AN ANCIENT MAP SHE HAD DISCOVERED.

FOLLOWING THE MAP'S INSTRUCTIONS, AMELIA FOUND HERSELF IN A DIMLY LIT STUDY. BOOKS LINED THE SHELVES, THEIR SPINES WORN AND FADED. IN THE CORNER, A DUSTY DESK STOOD COVERED IN YELLOWED PAPERS. ONE PARTICULAR JOURNAL CAUGHT HER ATTENTION. ITS PAGES WERE FILLED WITH SKETCHES AND NOTES, HINTING AT THE VAULT'S EXISTENCE.

DRIVEN BY EXCITEMENT, AMELIA CONTINUED HER SEARCH, DESCENDING INTO THE DEPTHS OF THE MANOR. THE CORRIDORS GREW NARROWER, THE WALLS CLOSING IN ON HER. THE TEMPERATURE DROPPED, AND THE AIR GREW THICK WITH A MUSTY SCENT. IT WAS AS THOUGH THE HOUSE ITSELF WAS WARNING HER TO TURN BACK.

IGNORING THE OMINOUS SIGNS, AMELIA DISCOVERED A HIDDEN PASSAGE CONCEALED BEHIND A BOOKSHELF. SHE STEPPED INTO THE DARKNESS, GUIDED ONLY BY A FLICKERING CANDLE IN HER HAND. THE PASSAGE SEEMED ENDLESS, THE SILENCE BROKEN ONLY BY THE SOUND OF HER OWN FOOTSTEPS. FINALLY, SHE REACHED A HEAVY IRON DOOR.

WITH TREMBLING HANDS, AMELIA PUSHED OPEN THE DOOR, REVEALING A VAST CHAMBER BATHED IN DIM LIGHT. DUST DANCED IN THE AIR, GIVING THE ROOM AN ETHEREAL FEEL. IN THE CENTER STOOD A MAGNIFICENT STONE PEDESTAL, UPON WHICH SAT A SMALL, ORNATE KEY. IT WAS THE KEY TO THE FORGOTTEN VAULT.

TREPIDATION MINGLED WITH EXCITEMENT AS AMELIA APPROACHED THE PEDESTAL. SHE PICKED UP THE KEY, FEELING A SURGE OF POWER. SHE KNEW THAT THIS WAS ONLY THE BEGINNING. THE TRUE CHALLENGE AWAITED HER WITHIN THE DEPTHS OF THE VAULT.

USING THE KEY, AMELIA UNLOCKED THE FINAL DOOR, REVEALING A ROOM FILLED WITH RICHES BEYOND HER WILDEST DREAMS. GOLD COINS, JEWELS, AND ARTIFACTS ADORNED THE SHELVES, EACH WHISPERING STORIES OF THEIR OWN. IT WAS A SIGHT TO BEHOLD, A TREASURE TROVE FROM CENTURIES PAST.

BUT AS AMELIA'S EYES GLEAMED WITH DELIGHT, A COLD GUST OF WIND BLEW THROUGH THE ROOM. THE DOOR SLAMMED SHUT BEHIND HER, TRAPPING HER INSIDE. PANIC SET IN AS THE ROOM SEEMED TO SHIFT AND CHANGE. THE TREASURE, ONCE DAZZLING, NOW BECAME TAINTED BY DARKNESS.

AMELIA REALIZED SHE HAD BEEN LURED INTO A TRAP, A TEST OF HER COURAGE AND DETERMINATION. SHE HAD TO PROVE HERSELF WORTHY OF THE TREASURE OR REMAIN TRAPPED FOREVER. FRANTICALLY, SHE SEARCHED FOR A WAY OUT, HER HEART POUNDING IN HER CHEST.

IN HER DESPERATION, AMELIA DISCOVERED AN INSCRIPTION CARVED INTO THE STONE WALL. IT READ: "ONLY THE TRUE SEEKER SHALL FIND THE WAY. LOOK WITHIN TO BREAK THE SPELL." IT WAS A RIDDLE, A CLUE TO HER ESCAPE.

AS SHE PONDERED THE MEANING, AMELIA THOUGHT BACK TO HER JOURNEY, HER UNWAVERING DETERMINATION TO UNCOVER THE TRUTH. SUDDENLY, SHE UNDERSTOOD. THE TRUE SEEKER WAS NOT ONE WHO SOUGHT RICHES BUT ONE WHO SOUGHT KNOWLEDGE.

fact or fictionguiltyinvestigationtravel

About the Creator

Salamullah Khatti

Passionate storyteller and creative explorer.

Helping others find inspiration and unleash their creativity.

Sharing the power of storytelling to make a positive impact in the world.

Turning dreams into words, one page at a time.

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.