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Beneath the Fifth Floor

Every Lie Has a Witness

By Asif NawazPublished 7 months ago 4 min read

The elevator hummed with a mechanical groan, the metal doors sliding open with a reluctant scrape. Detective Mara Keane stepped inside, the weight of the case pressing down like the stale air inside the building. The fifth floor was where it all began—and where it had gone horribly wrong.

She glanced at the flickering panel: the “5” button blinked erratically, caught between 4 and 5. The building’s century-old wiring was a puzzle on its own, and now it was part of a murder scene.

Two days ago, an anonymous tip led her here—to the abandoned offices of Hargrove Industries. The company had been shut down after a scandal five years prior, leaving secrets locked in dusty files and broken memories. But now, beneath the fifth floor, something darker lurked.

Mara’s partner, Jonas, hadn’t returned after investigating the basement. His last transmission was a garbled message: “Found something. You—be careful…”

The doors slid shut behind her, trapping her in a cocoon of cold steel and faint whispers. She pressed the button for the fifth floor again, willing the elevator to reach its destination.

When the doors parted, a corridor stretched before her, dimly lit by flickering fluorescents. The stale scent of decay and forgotten industry clung to the air. Mara’s boots echoed softly as she moved forward, flashlight cutting through the shadows.

The walls were lined with cracked paint and peeling wallpaper—remnants of a time when this place had purpose. Now, it was a tomb.

Near the end of the hallway, a twisted shape caught her eye—a bloodied handprint smeared on the metal frame of an emergency exit. She crouched, examining it carefully.

Suddenly, the sound of footsteps echoed behind her.

“Mara?”

She spun around, heart pounding. It was Jonas.

“Thank God,” she breathed.

But his face was pale, sweat beading on his forehead. “We’re not alone. Something’s down here. Something watching.”

They moved cautiously, the beam of their flashlights darting over stacks of forgotten files and shattered furniture. Then Mara’s light landed on a security camera mounted high on the wall—its lens cracked, wires dangling like severed veins.

“No one’s been watching us,” Jonas whispered.

“Or someone doesn’t want to be watched.”

They reached a heavy steel door marked “Authorized Personnel Only.” Jonas produced a crowbar, prying it open with effort. Inside was a cramped room, lined with filing cabinets and a large, ancient safe.

“Look at this,” Jonas said, rifling through papers. “Financial records, internal memos—proof the company was laundering money through shell accounts.”

Suddenly, a muffled thud echoed from somewhere below.

Mara’s blood ran cold. “The basement. That’s where Jonas went before he stopped responding.”

“We need to go down,” Jonas said, voice shaking.

The basement was accessible only through a rusted staircase behind a trapdoor in the floor. They lifted it, descending into darkness so thick it swallowed their light.

As they reached the bottom, a faint humming vibrated through the walls. The source was a hidden server room—machines blinking quietly, still alive in this forgotten place.

Mara approached the servers, noticing a flicker on one monitor—a live feed from a camera beneath the fifth floor.

Her heart stopped.

The screen showed a dimly lit sub-basement. A figure was tied to a chair, struggling against ropes.

“Who’s that?” Jonas asked.

Mara’s eyes narrowed. “Someone who knows the truth. Or maybe the real reason why Hargrove Industries was shut down.”

Suddenly, the monitor went black.

Behind them, a door slammed shut.

They were trapped.

Time blurred as they tried every exit—none opened. Then a voice crackled over a hidden speaker:

“Welcome, detectives. I’ve been expecting you.”

Mara’s hand moved instinctively to her sidearm, but it wasn’t there. She was disarmed.

“Why are you doing this?” Jonas shouted. “What do you want?”

“Justice,” the voice hissed. “For lies buried beneath the fifth floor.”

A single spotlight flickered on, illuminating the tied figure in the cell: a young woman with bruises on her face, eyes fierce with defiance.

Mara stepped forward, heart pounding. “Who are you?”

“Name’s Evelyn,” the woman rasped. “I was a whistleblower—until they buried me down here.”

Mara’s mind raced. Evelyn was the key—maybe the last witness alive.

Suddenly, footsteps thundered in the hallway. The door rattled under unseen force.

The voice laughed. “Time’s running out. Every lie has a witness, but not all live to tell the truth.”

The cell door hissed open.

A figure stepped in—a tall man in a tailored suit, his smile cold and calculating.

“Detectives,” he said smoothly. “You’ve uncovered too much.”

Mara raised her voice. “You’re behind this. You silenced Evelyn.”

The man’s smile faded. “She was a liability. But now, so are you.”

Jonas lunged, grabbing a broken pipe. The room exploded into chaos—metal clanged, curses flew, and shadows danced wildly.

Mara wrestled the man to the floor, desperation fueling her strength. She punched hard, breaking his jaw.

“Call for backup!” she yelled at Jonas.

Sirens wailed distantly.

The man snarled, struggling, but Mara held firm.

In the aftermath, Evelyn was rescued, and the truth was exposed—Hargrove Industries had run a covert operation, silencing anyone who threatened to reveal their crimes.

Mara stood outside the building, the dawn breaking over the city skyline.

“The fifth floor,” she whispered. “It held more than secrets. It held the cost of silence.”

Jonas clapped her on the shoulder. “We did good.”

But Mara’s eyes lingered on the building behind them. Beneath its crumbling facade, she knew there were still shadows waiting to be uncovered.

Because every lie has a witness.

And some secrets refuse to stay buried.

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