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A Killer's One Mistake

The Hitman Who Missed

By FarzadPublished 6 months ago 3 min read
His target was just another name—until it wasn’t

The Hitman Who Missed: A Killer's One Mistake

They called me The Clockmaker.

Because I was precise. Because I never failed. Because every job was timed to perfection.

Twenty-two confirmed kills. No fingerprints. No camera footage. No survivors.

Until one night, in a hotel room in Prague, I made a mistake.

A human one.

The job came in like they always did—an encrypted message with a time, location, and a face.

Target: Sophia Antonov, age 29, investigative journalist.

Location: Room 1607, Hotel Orion, Prague.

Deadline: 11:45 PM.

Reason: Unknown.

I never asked why. Not my business. Just names on a list. People who had done something to anger someone rich enough to make them disappear.

But something about this name... it stuck with me.

Sophia Antonov.

It was familiar.

I arrived in Prague two nights early. Booked a room across the hall from hers under a fake passport. Set up my rifle on the balcony, cleaned it twice. Then I started watching.

She wasn’t like most targets. Most people in her position—journalists who dig too deep—are paranoid. They check their locks twice. Avoid routines. Glance over their shoulders.

Not her.

She smiled at the concierge. Left tips for the maid. Wrote for hours in a leather-bound notebook. Every evening, she sat by the window, sipping tea, reading old books with pages falling apart at the spine.

She looked... kind.

That’s when it began.

The hesitation.

The night of the hit, I set up at 11:30 sharp. Her curtains were half-closed. She sat by the lamp, legs crossed, reading something in Russian. No bodyguards. No panic.

Just peace.

I raised the rifle. Finger on the trigger. One shot to the heart. No pain.

I exhaled.

Then she did something that changed everything.

She looked up.

Directly at me.

Not startled. Not scared. Just... knowing.

And smiled.

I froze.

My finger twitched—but didn’t pull.

The clock ticked past 11:45.

Job failed.

I packed up and disappeared into the night.

I should’ve reported the failure. Should’ve vanished into another country. But I couldn’t.

Something about that look haunted me.

So I followed her.

I watched from afar as she flew to Berlin. Then to Athens. Then to Rome. Always alone. Always writing.

After four days, I broke every rule I’d ever lived by and approached her in a café near the Colosseum.

"Is this seat taken?" I asked.

She looked up, the same knowing gaze.

“No. But I wondered how long it would take you.”

I froze. “You know who I am?”

“I guessed. The moment you didn’t pull the trigger.”

She sipped her espresso like we were old friends.

I didn’t run. I sat.

Her voice was calm. Not afraid. She told me she’d been expecting someone like me for years.

She had uncovered something—files, recordings, names. Evidence of a global child trafficking ring connected to politicians, CEOs, and even intelligence agencies.

She didn’t know who wanted her dead. Only that someone would come.

She had made peace with it.

"What changed your mind?" she asked.

"I don’t know," I said. "You looked up."

"And smiled?"

"Yes."

"You hesitated," she said softly. "Even machines can break."

Over the next week, we talked every day. In alleyways. Rooftops. Quiet bookstores.

I told her pieces of my story—just enough.

She told me hers.

She had a plan. She wasn’t just hiding. She was preparing to leak everything.

But she needed time.

“I can protect you,” I heard myself say.

“You’re the man who was sent to kill me.”

“Exactly.”

She nodded. “Then maybe I’m safest with you.”

I don’t know when I fell in love with her. Maybe I already was the moment I saw her smile.

For the first time in years, I felt human. Real.

And then they found us.

We were in Marseille. I stepped out for ten minutes to pick up new passports.

When I returned, the apartment was trashed. Blood on the floor. Her notebook missing.

No body.

No note.

Just silence.

I burned everything and went off-grid.

For three years, I searched. Underground contacts. Former clients. Black market whisperers.

No one knew anything.

No sightings. No leaks. No evidence.

Just a ghost.

Some say she was killed. Others say she flipped sides.

But me?

I think she ran.

She knew I’d follow her forever if I knew she was alive. So she vanished—to protect me.

Now I live in Lisbon under a new name. I don’t kill anymore.

But every year, on July 12th—the night we met—an envelope arrives at my door.

Inside is a photo.

A city skyline. A shadowed figure in the distance. A single word written on the back:

"Not yet."

She’s alive.

She’s waiting.

And one day, she’ll finish what she started.

And I’ll be there—gun holstered, no longer aimed.

Because the clockmaker finally missed…

…and that was the one thing that saved his soul.

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Farzad

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