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The World of Telekinon: King Aurin's Ascension

Prologue of a story I'm working on

By JakePublished 8 months ago 3 min read
A Grim Varkhul

In Telekinon’s untamed jungles, where bioluminescent vines pulse and tall trees sway in the thick, fear has long ruled. Varkhul packs, their charcoal-gray fur streaked with silver, stalk the shadows, their 5-foot frames leaping 18 feet to tear through human flesh. Above, Valks with 12-foot obsidian wings screech, their telescopic eyes spotting prey 5 miles away, guiding the packs with ultrasonic pulses. At the heart of each pack looms a Grim Varkhul, 7 feet of jet-black terror, its crimson-streaked fur and bone-crushing teeth a death sentence. For generations, these beasts have driven humans to hide in deep caves or beneath forest canopies, their lives dictated by the predators’ hunger. Human’s aren’t the top of the food chain at Telekinon.

The world of Telekinon is unlike any other. Largely due to the Motas that float in the thick air. Motas are atom-sized particles existing in a quantum state, imperceptible to the naked eye, that permeate the planet’s thick atmosphere. They carry a unique energy signature, interacting with biological matter and electrical energy in extraordinary ways. Motas can hold a charge of electrons but without electrons it cannot function. Much about Motas are unknown but most people think Motas are the reason for the unexplained.

Luther Aurin, an 18-year-old with eyes like storm-lit amber, has changed everything. Born to parents bearing a rare mutation, he wields the atom-sized Mota particles that hum in Telekinon’s dense atmosphere. His powers are raw, untested: telekinesis to hurl objects, speed to outrun a Varkhul’s quick sprint, strength to shatter bone, and reactions sharp enough to dodge a Valk’s dive. Aurin believes he’s only on the cusp of his growing powers with Motas. In a glowing cave, he discovered his gift, lifting a boulder with a thought, though the act left him trembling, electrons drained from his body. Now, he rallies a ragtag army—hunters, smiths, and farmers—united by his promise: to end the Varkhul reign.

Tonight, under a moon veiled by Mota currents, Aurin leads 200 men to the beasts’ nest, a sprawling ruin of jagged stone and twisted roots deep in the Emberfall Jungle. The air is heavy, stifling ranged weapons, forcing reliance on swords, spears, and shields. Aurin’s blade, forged with Mota-infused steel, hums faintly, its edge crackling with stored electrons. His army, clad in leather and dragon-scale, moves silently, trained to exploit the nest’s slumber. Aurin’s heart pounds, not from fear but from his own excitement in battle. He knows no fear as his powers and abilities have never failed him.

At the ruin’s edge, Aurin raises a hand, his voice low but resonant, carrying the weight of a king unborn. “For too long, we’ve cowered,” he says, eyes sweeping his men. “Varkhuls and Valks think us prey. Tonight, we are the hunters. For our kin, for our future, we break their nest! We must rise up and vanquish the beasts that put us into hiding!” The men, stirred by his conviction, grip their weapons, their fear eclipsed by hope. Aurin’s Mota-enhanced senses catch the faint infrasound of sleeping Varkhuls, their 3-mile scent range dormant. He signals, and the army creeps into the ruin, shadows among shadows.

Aurin strikes first, his sword plunging into a Varkhul’s chest, the blade’s Mota charge searing flesh. The beast’s scream—high and guttural—shatters the silence, waking the nest. Valks erupt into the sky, their shrieks sowing panic, while Varkhuls, eyes glinting amber, lunge from the darkness. Chaos erupts. Spears clash with toxin-laced claws; shields splinter under 500-pound charges. Men fall, their screams drowned by the pack’s roars, but Aurin moves like a storm. His telekinesis hurls a Varkhul into a stone wall, bones cracking. His speed dodges a Valk’s talons, his sword slashing its wing. Each act drains him, sweat stinging his eyes, but the Mota currents feed his resolve.

The pack’s leader, a 7-foot colossus Grim Varkhul emerges, its scarred hide a map of battles won. Its six eyes lock on Aurin, its infrasound roar shaking the ruin, triggering primal fear in the men. The beast charges, its 48-mph sprint closing the gap, claws gleaming with paralytic venom. Aurin stands firm, unafraid. He channels Motas, electrifying his sword until it glows white-hot, sparks arcing in the dense air. The Grim Varkhul swipes, its telekinetic shockwave toppling pillars, but Aurin’s enhanced reactions let him weave through the assault, his speed a blur. He leaps, Mota-strength propelling him onto the beast’s back, and drives his blade through its thick chest, the Mota charge bursting its heart. The Grim Varkhul collapses, its death-roar fading.

The pack falters. Valks scatter, their ultrasonic signals unanswered; surviving Varkhuls flee into the jungle. Aurin, bloodied but unbowed, raises his glowing sword, his voice cutting through the night: “The nest is broken! We are free!” His men, battered but alive, cheer, their weapons raised. In that moment, Luther Aurin is no mere youth but a king, anointed by victory. The tribes, hearing of the battle, will flock to him, forging an empire from the ruins of fear.

DystopianFantasyFiction

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Jake

I love pokemon

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  • Ryan8 months ago

    What a great prologue!

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