Boil, boil, toil and trouble.
JBaz Twisted Unofficial Challenge- What yet another one?
Let’s just say for fun, they never came. Let’s imagine a place where we live in peace and harmony, just minding our own. Let’s pretend this is not really happening.
But oh no, they had to find us and trap us in cages, and to what end?
The reason is far more evil than any of us could have expected, a horror beyond imagining. Now I sit here waiting, biding my time waiting for the inevitable demise that is moments or days away. That is the worst, not knowing when you will be chosen, when those horrid limbs reach in, dragging us from the last vestige of safety.
We we’re never sure what was in store for us, what barbaric ritual was planned.
A sacrifice to a higher being?
Forced into submission to do their bidding?
Both of those would be desirable to what really happens to us, I discovered the truth by accident. Locked in our cage, I found an area from which I could spy upon what transpires once we are chosen….it was the screams that grabbed my attention…..oh the madness.
I press myself against this invisible barrier that locks us in, and watch as the truth unfolds.
I cry out but none hear me. Watching in horror they now tear into my kin, ripping him apart then dipping his limbs into some golden liquid before raising it up to their maws, chewing and slobbering, their teeth rip into the flesh. Glistening juices run down fat pouty lips. We are sustenance for these monsters, food for their bloated bellies.
Poor Bob.
Oh, how I would love the chance to toss their flabby bodies in that bubbling water, see how they enjoy it.
I bang against this cell in rage, but the barrier is too strong, and I cannot fight back because of these blue stretchy bindings wrapped around my pinchers. Many of us have lost faith in our Saviour. Oh, great Neptune, why hast thou abandon us?
However, I will say, there is an interesting scent filtering through my liquid cell, which is rather tantalizing.
Honestly Bob never smelled so good.
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The Challenge:
Write a short story 300-600 words -using a famous quote or phrase and interpret it in any way you wish.
Poetry is welcomed- Under 300 words (roughly)
I am not going to be too fussy on exact word count, but please try to stay close.
Rule:
Title should be the quote.
Sub title - JBaz Twisted Quote Unofficial Challenge-
PLEASE - link your story to this, I would not want to miss reading it.
PRIZE: For me to pay out I believe you may need to be Vocal+ member: (Anyone correct me if I am wrong)
$ Five dollars for the winner
$ Three dollars for second place
Judging will be done by two people who have a twisted sense of humor, and one who likes to laugh, so take that as your hint of what we are looking for.
TIME: Contest ends Midnight Pacific standard time Novemer 30th
I will try to announce the winner By December 5th.
Enjoy, lets see where your warped mind goes.
Entries To Date: ( Hope I am not missing any, let me know if you notice)
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.



Comments (47)
I'm a little bummed that I missed this challenge! I had something drafted but didn't have time to finish it. I will catch the next one!
This one was written a while ago, but forgot to post. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-best-laid-plans-of-mice-and-men-oft-go-awry-and-leave-us-nothing-but-grief-and-pain-for-promised-joy-robert-burns%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hurray! I made the deadline, lol. Happy holidays, my friend! https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/show-me-the-money-tg2ht0u3b%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here's my entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/stories/see-a-penny-pick-it-up%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here you go! Had a few false starts but finally got it across the line: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/all-that-glitters-is-not-gold-igf4o0axe%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
My entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/confessions/we-don-t-see-things-as-they-are-we-see-them-as-we-are-anais-nin-or-probably-others%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I am late to the party, busy with work and very tired...and I have some ideas...
Some excellent stuff here. I took on adage “Clothes make the man.” https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/clothes-make-the-man%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
The crabs were such a hilarious twist! Love this concept of twisting quotes! Here's my entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/three-can-keep-a-secret-if-two-of-them-are-dead%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Thanks for hosting the contest! Here's my entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/you-must-be-the-change-you-wish-to-see-in-the-world?via=laura-pruett
Well-wrought! Nice perspective twist there!
Congrats on your Top Story, Jason!
Back to say Congratulations for your place on the Leaderboard. So well deserved. Art like this isn't common. You experience it; it climaxes in a totally unexpected way; and you say to yourself, "Well, I should have saw that coming!" The foreshadowing makes it great. Love it that Vocal recognized you for this one. I'm still stewing on a way to take this challenge myself.
Congratulations on winning the second place for Most Popular Story 🎉🎉✨ You've done this beautifully
Wooohooooo congratulations on making the Leaderboard! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations for placing second for Most Popular Story on this week's leaderboard. Well done.
Oh man, I’ve already read a few stories inspired by your prompt. The allure is there! Gonna have a thought or two tonight and whip something up. Congrats, J! Awesome challenge!
Haha! Very clever example piece, JBaz! I hope to get something together!
Here's my entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/i-was-educated-once-it-took-me-years-to-get-over-it%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E.%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Will jump in.
Her is mine https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/i-am-the-one-you-warned-me-of%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
🎉 Congrats on getting Top Story—well deserved! 🌟 Keep up the amazing work! 💪✨
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Phenomenal storytelling! Superb writing! BRAVO!
yay congats on Top Story!