📢 Raise Your Voice Thread: 8/31/2023
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Our “Raise Your Voice Threads” are hosted every other Thursday at 12PM ET to offer creators more avenues to uncover exceptional stories on Vocal. As we are continuously searching for fresh creators and inspiring stories, this thread provides an opportunity to exchange and discuss the stories that have moved and motivated us on Vocal.
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Lamar Wiggins' villanelle, "Provisional Equality" has a consistent rhyme and cyclical nature that resonates with life's rhythms, intertwining harmony in both content and form. We were impressed by his adoption of this style of poetry and found it quite impactful, driving home the powerful theme of the pursuit and right to equality.
Now it's your turn. Share your favorite stories in the comments below.
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Hello there, I am ThatWriterWoman, an anonymous writer who publishes her fables and short fiction on Vocal! I would like to like to recommend Donna Fox. I find her imagination enchanting and I am sure you will too! She is making some real magic with her latest story: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/jogger-s-trail-the-story%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Enjoy!
Loved your effort, Congratulations on your Top Story ♥️ Check this out also: https://shopping-feedback.today/criminal/the-unheard-voices%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This week I'd like to nominate my friend Scott Christensen, who's become a close correspondent over on Vocal's Discord channel. Scott and I have a place in common, which is China, where he is now and I was for ten years. Many of you will have recently read his well-deserved Top Story "Tales of a 90s Stripper," which dealt with the subject of AI, but the one I'd like to call your attention to is the following piece on that faraway land Scott and I have both called home. If you've been, I guarantee every sentence will bring back memories, and if you've not, I can't think of a better introduction! https://shopping-feedback.today/wander/cashless-for-24-hours-in-shenzhen-china%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hi, I write fiction and poetry, and I think I'm finding my voice thanks to Vocal. Teresa Renton is a wonderful author who weaves together language as if she's just breathing it out. Reading her work can be an ethereal experience - she's so very good. One of her pieces I really enjoyed is: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/petrichor-8egy0u5g%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hi I am Mike and I help Admin the Vocal Social Society, as usual I am late to this but hope someone will see my five excellent stories that I have enjoyed and are maybe deserving of a Top Story. So here we go 1: This excellent VSS Challenge entry from Rachel Deeming https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/dolly-and-the-doll%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 2: I love this magical story by Brin J https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/odes-and-accolades%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 3: An absolutely beautiful poem by Sheila L. Chingwa https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/thank-you-creator%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 4; A great critique on the misogyny in Mozart's "Magic Flute" by Jaye Ruggiero-Cash https://shopping-feedback.today/critique/a-brief-thought-the-magic-flute%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E And finally 5: A wonderful extended haiku sequence by Kayleigh Fraser ❤️ https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/apples-and-eve%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hello. Cathy here. I write mostly poetry, fiction, and the occasional humorous bit about my sarcastic cat (I swear it's all true). Speaking of humor, check out this piece by Gerald Holmes about a recent medical procedure. It's hilarious. https://shopping-feedback.today/humor/the-day-i-met-the-one-eyed-snake?fbclid=IwAR2z3WGvffjGbN6usFfdc76Bak95VcMpSHx7GaDv0lYsSOvA3FYswCrPUXE
I've also been wowed by the potency of this self critique by Emma Kate Coleman - https://shopping-feedback.today/critique/critiquing-myself%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E, And this revisiting of a writing exercise by ...oh! I hadn't realised! Also Emma Kate Coleman! Clearly loving a bit of Emma Kate Coleman this week! https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/reinventing-poets%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hello! I've really enjoyed this thought provoking essay on how we relate to our favourite books -https://shopping-feedback.today/bookclub/forever-changing-3u15h0di7%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E And it sits nicely in the conversation alongside Mackenzie Davis' top story, https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/vulnerability-as-art-separation%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Take a Moment ✨📚 and Explore a Great Creator, who recently published an extraordinary Article 📝😉❤️👌🚶 https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/the-dreamer-the-monster-and-me%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
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https://shopping-feedback.today/bookclub/turtles-all-the-way-down%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E I love the book suggestion by Ashley Lima
Some beautiful poetry EYHCS https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-truth-and-nothing-but-the-truth-l513y02oc%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/purposeful-madness%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Amy Christie https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/in-jasmine-colors%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E KEKE https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/my-luv4-u%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Silver Serpent books https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/listening-at-full-capacity%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Gregory Anderson https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/outcry%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/through-her-eyes-3jbv0nxp%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Valentine Vampire https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/laguna-blue%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Today is our last challenge release for this awesome writing madness and James and I launched for the month of August. We’ve had so many amazing writers join in and share some incredible stories and poems. The challenges are always up and available for anyone to try regardless of august being basically over. Thank you to all the community that made it such a success! https://shopping-feedback.today/motivation/james-and-oneg-s-summer-writing-challenge-extravaganza%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Ohhh, one more by Ashley: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/stairway-to-heaven-ax3d0b6a%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Chloe here! I write mostly sci-fi stories and some horror bits here and there, but recently I’ve also taken up free-verse poetry. I LOVED this piece by Earl W. Pearl. Take a look! He speaks the truth! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/an-introduction-wj2e02f8%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hi everyone! 💞 I loved this piece by Scott: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/starry-night-over-the-rhone-meda0bl6%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E And this one by Mohammed!: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/crossing-the-boundary-of-darkness%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E And this one by Paul: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/welcome-to-my-mind-3b2o20zq4%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I have one more to share. Really like this writer's work in Wander Community and found this story so interesting. I probably won't be able to buy clothes in South Korea anytime soon. This piece by Sh*t Happens -Lost Travel Girl was very informative about one size fits means in South Korea https://shopping-feedback.today/wander/trying-to-fit-into-korea-s-one-size-fits-all-beauty-standards%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I am trying not to overshare, as I've noticed that it can be unintentionally upsetting to some folks. But it seems a little quiet today, so I am sharing just one more, from ThatWriterWoman. This one has such clever and deft usage of the old and the very new: I didn't want it to end. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/cinder-1ieo00ys%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
My name is Michael and I write fantasy stories that are all in the same world, I just started releasing my first novel on Vocal, broken up into weekly pieces.
I am bringing up an oldie but goodie!!! This was one of the first stories I read after creating the Facebook group Vocal + Assist. it is by Tiffany Gordon and packs such a powerful punch. With this writing she displays her inner strength and desire for doing what is good!!! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/not-welcomed-anymore%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
RYV creator team- this needs a quick edit today: "⭐⭐ After today's Raise Your Voice, we will be launching 4 new communities that will transform the way you engage with writers and readers on Vocal. You don't want to miss it. ⭐⭐"