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A Minor Inconvenience

bridging the stereotypes

By Shirley BelkPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Top Story - September 2024
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Destinations and the reasons for them differ immeasurably. But plans of how people arrive to them are mostly made because of financial means. But not always. Sometimes it can be for convenience, time restraint, or even aerophobia/ fear of flying. For whatever the reason, Janie found herself travelling on the same Greyhound bus ride that night as the two elderly women she watched from the seat she had taken behind theirs. They looked to both be grandmothers.

One grandmother, a short, plump white lady wore a brown tweed jacket with a brooch on the lapel that read, "Nana." She was friendly enough and had smiled at Janie as she ambled to her seat earlier. If Janie had to guess, she'd say that this Nana could have certainly afforded herself a plane ticket. It was odd that she chose to go where she needed to go by bus.

Most people who looked like her wouldn't have opted to join a load of full of mostly brown and black people as their first choice. At least, that was her opinion and experience in life. She was a young Mexican-American woman on her way to visit her married older sister. Her parents had reluctantly given her permission after high school graduation and this would be her first solo trip, making her way from Laredo to Shreveport.

It was already dark and late in the evening when one of the stops was Austin. That is where Janie first saw "Nana." She was lucky to find a seat, walking almost to the back of the bus where there was an aisle seat next to a snoring mid-aged man, unkempt in appearance.

It was mostly quiet except for an occasional muted whisper or two. The inside lights only scattered. Many wanted to rest as some of their journeys had been long. Some listened to music with their headphones. The rattling of the bus and the bumpy ride were a rude source of ambience to go along with the comfort of cramped leg space.

And soon, the bus stopped somewhere between Austin and Waco...maybe Temple. Some of the passengers were annoyed that there wasn't enough time for a smoke break. Janie was glad because she didn't like the after-smell.

She noticed that the man who had been snoring next to Nana had departed as well as the couple next to her on the other side of the bus. And that is when she saw three small African-American girls timidly finding their way towards the empty seats. Behind them appeared the "other" grandmother, even older and far more worn down by life than Nana. She carried a sleeping infant in her arms along with several bags. Janie wondered where the mother of this brood was. Nana was most likely wondering the same thing.

Two of the young girls sat together in the chair next to Nana, excited about looking out of the window. The oldest child took the assorted bags to help her grandmother. As the old lady sat down, obviously tired, she let out a big sigh. One of the younger girls asked Grandma if they could have their chips and soda now. Exasperated, Grandma said, "You'll have to hold the baby while I get them," and attempted to reach across the aisle for the hand off.

Nana spoke up, "Do you mind if I hold the baby?" No other words were needed as the sleeping bundle was placed in her care. The baby fit quite easily within Nana's arms. And gratefulness covered Grandma's face.

As they rode to Dallas, no words were spoken. The baby roused a couple of times and a bottle was handed to Nana, who appeared to be skillful in the art of nurturing babies. Grandma dozed and bobbed her head for a few winks, too.

As the bus made its stop, both Nana and Janie would layover for a new bus. Janie noticed that Nana's jacket had a big wet spot where the infant had made his abode. All part of taking care of a baby. What goes in must come out. Janie had changed many of her nephew's and nieces diapers.

Janie thought about Nana. She didn't have to help, but she did. It had even come with a small price to pay...a minor inconvenience. She wasn't related and was of a different race, but there had been no hesitation. Maybe the human race didn't need boundaries, after all, she thought.

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About the Creator

Shirley Belk

Mother, Nana, Sister, Cousin, & Aunt who recently retired. RN (Nursing Instructor) who loves to write stories to heal herself and reflect on all the silver linings she has been blessed with :)

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a year ago

    What a heartwarming tale!💖 Also, I love that verse in the Bible!✅

  • Testabout a year ago

    This is a touching story. Well done!

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Congrats on a great top story. Our rushed lifestyles and petty biases make it difficult to accept minor inconveniences, but the world would make such a better place if we can tolerate them. Well said.

  • Colleen Waltersabout a year ago

    The picture is amazing- that one is one of my favorite verses! ❤️ Congratulations on Top Story 😁

  • Mary K Brackettabout a year ago

    Beautiful story! Congratulations on Top Story.

  • Roxann Drakeabout a year ago

    That's such a sweet act by the grandmother! Enjoyed the storytelling.

  • Linda Goodmanabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Congratulations on well deserved top story Shirley!!🎉🎉🎉

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    Congrats on top story! amazing story, 1 word "subscribed."

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    ... not sure if you are a member of Vocal+ assist but I have just posted a comment there about your story. Thanks for some inspiring writing.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What a wonderfully woven story. You’ve brought your characters to vivid life. Congratulations on the top story-well deserved.

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Truly a delightful and life-affirming tale. Also great to follow these weary travellers' journey through the place names you mention. Gives a real feel of going places. Also reminded me of the song Streets of Laredo, the haunting back-theme of the Cohen bros movie The Ballad of Buster Scruggs. I will be playing that on my guitar later today (I have recently become a music student). Thanks for a lovely read and congrats on the TS

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Can always rely on you for reminder of the better sides of our species! beautiful, Shirley! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    This felt like a warm hug ;) Such an uplifting piece that had me smiling. Thank goodness for Nanas and Janies and Grandmas in the world :)

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    A lovely story about the human connection that's often lacking today. Congratulations on Top Story, Shirley!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Such a lovely story of kindness. Congrats on the TS.

  • Angel skyabout a year ago

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  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Congratulations on top story. I am glad it got top story. Love your cover picture 💞💞💞

  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    I freely give my heart to this story, it was so well written and wholesome in every way possible. There was no way I could read this without getting to the end, it was so engaging. You literally are the only person that could write this story and do it justice, hats off mam, hats off.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Lovely, Shirley. Human kindness is everywhere. This challenge will show it.

  • "What goes in must come out." Not me thinking something entirely inappropriately when I read that 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 The world needs more people like Nana!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    This is beautiful, Shirley. So filled with heart and empathy. It reminds me of my grandmother. We called her Grandy and she was grand. She was poor all of her life but was the most generous and kind person I have ever known. My mom used to say, if aliens landed on earth and asked someone to explain what a Christian was, she would have introduced them to her mother-in-law and told them this is a Christian. She was not one to say I love you because she was too busy demonstrating it.

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Sb - Such a lovely tale of different times. Riding buses is a risk these days requiring National Guard protection: Bring back the days of Nana's kindness..! *Smoke-um-if-u-got-um..! j-bud

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    I've witnessed events like this during my days as an intercity bus driver. They didn't happen often, but it was nice when they did.

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