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Your God Sucks

An Inverse Etheree Poem

By Kenny PennPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Your God Sucks
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Faith.

Stressed by

Tearful cries,

Screaming prayers,

Desperate and haunted,

By nightmares, forever

Terrified of demons, cowed

In the shadows. We'll never be

Safe from Judgement, with horrid preachers

Teaching kids hell, so their religion stays

Relevant, their greedy churches exist,

Because they took from us. They remain

Freed 0f false pretenses. We need

A moment to breathe. We live,

Desperate to be allowed

Happiness. We're not

Giving our lives

Their vile faith,

Absent

Love

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Kenny Penn

Thanks for reading! I enjoy writing in various genres, my favorites being horror/thriller and dark/epic fantasies. I'll also occasionally drop a poem or two.

More at: www.kennypenn.com

My Top Stories: https://www.kennypenn.com/vocalmedia/

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  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Very well written, expressive and smooth.

  • This was like an outline of my mind regarding " brick and mortar" churches these days..or had it always been this way and I just opened my 👀!? Excellent Kenny!

  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    I loved this so much, It felt like letting out a long breathe

  • Whoaaaa, this was so incredible! It reads so well both ways! Well done!

  • Tressa Rose2 years ago

    This hot really close to home for me, as I was raised in an extreme baptist religion. The fear of hell was Instilled in me from a child. I never could agree with the belief, but the trauma of it still affects me today. Great job on this piece!

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒2 years ago

    Well done, Kenny! Inverse AND Etheree! Wow! That takes talent and patience!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Very well done!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Oof, powerful stuff! 👌

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Excellent!

  • JBaz2 years ago

    Writing these poems are not in my wheel house , so I appreciate when others, like yourself, do such a great job.

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