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You’re Eye’s Excite Me

The bluest of blue

By Marie381Uk Published 4 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

You’re Eye’s Excite Me

Your eyes hold me,

not cruel but burning.

They pull me into fire,

I can not escape.

They flash with secrets,

I hunger to taste them.

To drown in that dark light,

to lose myself in your gaze.

Each glance makes me tremble,

my breath stumbles.

Your eyes strip me bare,

without touch.

I stand naked in their storm,

the world fades away.

Nothing matters but that look,

that look that devours.

Your eyes excite me past reason,

they promise danger and joy.

Heaven and ruin together,

all in one stare.

Though I fear them,

still I beg for more.

Your eyes are the flame I choose,

the flame that keeps me alive.

How you’re yes excite me.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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