You know me better
better than you thought
you thought that you lost me
you lost me in the dark
in the dark I was a spark
a spark that never gave up
never gave up trying
trying and surviving
surviving the chaos
the chaos you put me in
you put me into a cage
a cage with starving demons
demons that tore me into pieces
pieces that are now lost
lost in life forever
forever and even longer.
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The daughter of silence
It all started when Echo was five. She kept having these nightmares where she would just fall into a dark pit, screaming insanely loud, yet no one, not even her own parents would hear her. It was terrifying. But the most horrible part was that when she'd wake up panting, her parents were nowhere to be found, just like in her dream. She'd always cry herself to sleep alone and helpless.
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Melancholy, yet beautifully written!!!❤️❤️💕
The words are crafted with sadness!
I loved how the ending of each line became the beginning of the next line. Your poem was so poignant yet so beautifully written!
Wonderful, beautiful and oh so sad! Great poem, Anna!
Sad but beautiful ❤️😊😍
I really liked they way you flowed this poem!
I like the rhythm and patterns of this. Makes me wanna know more... Many thanks for sharing!
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Super desolate and hard-hitting, great work here.
I enjoyed reading this one, sad as it is. Perhaps "gape" is a typo in your line "a spark that never gape up"