You Give Me...
a random poem from the top of my head (like always)
By Luna JordanPublished 9 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Vinicius "amnx" Amano on Unsplash
Headaches.
Everyday,
All the time.
Dilemma in my heart,
Annoyance in my soul.
Can’t get rid of you,
Hindrances in my life.
Everyone agrees, though their experience differs.
Siblings.
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Comments (6)
Wasn’t expecting that last line! Haha! My mind went to work stuff right away. Great acrostic!
I love the snapshot of everyday struggles—indeed siblings are the headache and the cure all in one. ✨
That final line was quite the plot twist!! I loved this, Luna!
Your poem does strike several ideas for a headache itself and what causes them. Good job.
Don't have siblings so I can't relate, lol. Loved your poem!
The end made me chuckle as I wasnt sure where it might end! very relatable acrostic, Luna! good job!