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you are simply

bad product

By angela hepworthPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Angel and demon

Artist, so dauntless

Arrogant, deceitful

Aiming for decimation, they say

You are everything and all of it

A king on his throne

A monster

A role model

Paint a picture of you

Put it on my wall

Kiss it hard

Or punch a hole through your fucking head

And watch the blood seep down

Onto your smiling face

A face that everybody knows

New York City

Winter in January

Walking jovially with all your

Watches and jewelry

Wait and just

See how they’ll bend and break

All your shiny things

I know you know where they came from

Don’t hold them up to the light

Don’t think they will never fade

Laughter and tears

Love and tyranny

Lives risked, treason

Lies and false tolerance

Legal issues, taking advantage of

Every soul you meet

And they never see through you

Don’t you tire of it?

That endless, mindless power

When does the game grow stale?

The hatred of everyone else but yourself

Stowed away behind a smile

And a few sharp words

Narcissism has killed you

And warped your mind

Making you see them all as less than

Even when they hold you

To a standard like no other

Because the sound of their applause means

They love you

They don’t love you

They love the idea of you

You’re just bad product

Defective, tentatively ticking away

Biding your time

And losing your value

Thank you guys so much for reading! For anyone who may be interested, I’ve been watching The Boys and Stan Edgar’s words to Homelander inspired this poem.

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angela hepworth

Hello! I’m Angela and I enjoy writing fiction, poetry, reviews, and more. I delve into the dark, the sad, the silly, the sexy, and the stupid. Come check me out!

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  • Heather Zieffle about a year ago

    Wonderfully written! I love the line "you're just bad product", very relevant in so many ways about what's going on in the world.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Loved this - especially the last few lines. Brill.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    What excellent use of alliteration in pockets! And great flow too! Really liked, “See how they’ll bend and break All your shiny things”

  • Cassie Gabout a year ago

    I just finished watching “dirty pop: boy band scam” on Netflix and this reminds me of it to a T. World revolving around money and the idea of success so much that it literally implodes and takes everyone with it

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Loved this ❤

  • This was certainly very thought provoking! Loved your poem

  • Savannah K. Wilsonabout a year ago

    So going to have to read this again and again, I feel there's so much more to get from it! Incredible work! 🩷

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