you should have known how crazy I’d get
when I found out you betrayed me
I don’t care what happens now
all of this for nothing
you are such a fiend
don’t feel bad now
tear me open
make me
bleed
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angela hepworth
Hello! I’m Angela and I enjoy writing fiction, poetry, reviews, and more. I delve into the dark, the sad, the silly, the sexy, and the stupid. Come check me out!
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Your work portrays the pain of deceit and the struggle to cope with heartbreak, amazing job, love it, thank you very much for sharing!
Love the rhythmic flow to this! Almost like a taunting chant! Excellent work!
Much appreciated with your work.
Hit me on a such deep level. Incredibly done! 💌
So deep and from the soul!
Perfectly written , and deep
I hate the self destructive abandon that betrayal arouses in us. Nicely brought to life.
I don't get why people choose to betray or cheat when they can just leave if they're unhappy. So dumb. Loved your Nonet!
Felt the emotion in that one! Great writing! 🩷
Outstanding work, Angela. You are very talented.