Yellow's iridescence
Feeling mellow in yellow! (Poppys color prompt).
How marvelously, scintillatingly dazzling is Yellow
Perceived in odd shades of the iridescence of green
Coruscating happily Amidst
Autumn leaves chasing the wind
Happily frolicking, dancing and shimmering
Betwixt sunlight and shadow
Making the world smile in dazzling wonder
As yellow eludes and blends into the colored Spectrum
Of life
Imagine, yearn and desire mellow yellow's alluring touch
Enjoy the caress and nourishing rays of the sun upon your skin
Today our desire for the rays of sunny yellow
Arrives in sunlight and blended lustrous shades
Yellow bids you enjoy the flamboyant and vibrant show
Of Autumn
For soon it bids farewell, adieu, au revoir
Ciao and farewell!
Until next year, adios!
See you soon mellow yellow!
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Poppy's prompt.
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Novel Allen
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Comments (9)
"They call me Mellow Yellow." (Usually when I'm in the pool. I don't get it.)
You just have this way with words, you don't bend them to your will you're more like a sculptor that molds and shapes them! You work with them like a team instead of thrashing them about in some meaningless way!! I love your vivid imagery and descriptive language! This gave me a beautiful moment of peace this morning and I am so grateful to you for it!! Great work Novel!!
This was breathtakingly beautiful! You did such an amazing job with Poppy's prompt! Loved your poem so much Momma!
What a bright ode to yellow 🟡💛. Love it.
Brilliant & beautiful!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
I got to learn something new today. Bravo!!
I love how you ended up personifying Yellow, particularly the lines “Yellow bids you enjoy the flamboyant and vibrant show / Of Autumn”. It made for an unexpected twist to an already lovely poem about a color/nature. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Beautiful
Ooo I love this!! It was gorgeous start to finish! This part was my favourite: ‘Imagine, yearn and desire mellow yellow's alluring touch’ You’re thriving off this prompt and I’m loving it!