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Wooden Lies

A Stream of Consciousness Poem for the Unfiltered Challenge

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago β€’ 2 min read
Top Story - September 2024
Wooden Lies
Photo by Rhamely on Unsplash

Prologue

Pinnochio's always been a favorite Disney character, and a tool parents use to remind children not to fib. And he reminds adults of the consequence of their delusions.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

I wanted to be real, that’s allβ€”

to have flesh and bones,just like you.

But I told them what I had to,

and they trusted me,

didn’t they?

I smiled at them, I nodded,

and twisted the truthβ€”

until it shattered.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

Do they see me now?

The way my nose grows,

not just in front of my face,

but into everything,

curling up into dead knots.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

I wanted freedom once beforeβ€”

to walk, to jump,

but each word carved deeper into the wood,

Splitting.

Splitting.

Splat.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

Real kids tell the truth, they saidβ€”

but I’m not real, am I?

(Not yet, not yet.)

So I say what they want me to.

(Wouldn’t you?)

A lie’s better than dead silenceβ€”

the hollow thump on the wood

where a heart should beat.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

But a lie never ends, does it?

One lie merges with the next,and I pull it,

Tug,

Pull,

Stretch,

longer, thinner,strung like a stiff puppet

with too many hands

pulling.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

Who’s pulling me?

Is it Geppetto?Jiminy?

Or someone darker,

Someone nameless?

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

The strings tighten with each pull,

and I hear the awful creakof my wooden limbsβ€”

but I smile to please them,

hoping they won’t notice

my stiffness,

my tightness.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

They believed me once.

But nowβ€”they see my nose,

the way it stretches before me

making a path of no return.

Perhaps they’re lying, too.

(A lie defends another.)

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

If I could stop thisβ€”

just tell the truth for one momentβ€”

but how can a puppet know the truth?

What’s real when all I’ve ever been is wood,

someone else’s dream?

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

I wanted to be real,

but all I’ve made are tales,

so tall that, in the dark,

when my strings are still,

they cast their shadow on the wall.

They’re always thereβ€”

growing,

Growing.

Growing.

So huge I’m lost beneath them.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

Maybe when I’m good,

I’ll wake up one fine day,

no strings, no woodβ€”

just the truth.

πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘ΊπŸ‘ΉπŸͺ€πŸŽ­πŸŽ­πŸ€‘πŸ‘Ί

I’ll be a boy, a real boy,

with a thumping heart

instead of splintering legs.

But until thenβ€”

one more tale,one more fib.

Just one more.

(It wouldn’t hurt, would it?)

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story

  • Laura Pruettabout a year ago

    Another interesting take inspired by a classic childhood character!

  • mureed hussainabout a year ago

    This is a poignant and insightful reimagining of Pinocchio's tale. Your words capture the character's internal struggle with identity and authenticity in a powerful way. The imagery of the growing nose and the relentless pull of the strings is particularly striking. You've managed to delve deep into the psychological complexities of the character, exploring themes of self-deception, societal expectations, and the longing for genuine connection. This poem is a testament to the enduring power of storytelling and the human condition.

  • Andrew Jamesabout a year ago

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  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Congratulations on TSπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰ Fabulous job, I was right in his mind with him.

  • Beautiful Reggie. This story really brought tears to my eyes at the end. It's a wonderful tribute.

  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • Jamye Sharpabout a year ago

    Very deep. The frantic self questioning that every adult faces, let alone children.

  • rose amyabout a year ago

    Great

  • Love the form of this and the image

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Back to say, "Congratulations on Top Story!!!"πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is very well done. Congrats on the TS.

  • L.C. SchΓ€ferabout a year ago

    This one is deliciously dark, like mahogany. Fitting, given the film!

  • Testabout a year ago

    I love this! The emojis also give it a nice touch. Well done!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Awesome stream of consciousness poem!!! Loving it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Oh, I do love this tale from poor little Pinnochio’s perspective … wonderful Stream of Consciousness βœ…

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Will he ever learn? Great tale, Michelle.

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