Wooden Lies
A Stream of Consciousness Poem for the Unfiltered Challenge
Prologue
Pinnochio's always been a favorite Disney character, and a tool parents use to remind children not to fib. And he reminds adults of the consequence of their delusions.
ππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊ
I wanted to be real, thatβs allβ
to have flesh and bones,just like you.
But I told them what I had to,
and they trusted me,
didnβt they?
I smiled at them, I nodded,
and twisted the truthβ
until it shattered.
ππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊ
Do they see me now?
The way my nose grows,
not just in front of my face,
but into everything,
curling up into dead knots.
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I wanted freedom once beforeβ
to walk, to jump,
but each word carved deeper into the wood,
Splitting.
Splitting.
Splat.
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Real kids tell the truth, they saidβ
but Iβm not real, am I?
(Not yet, not yet.)
So I say what they want me to.
(Wouldnβt you?)
A lieβs better than dead silenceβ
the hollow thump on the wood
where a heart should beat.
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But a lie never ends, does it?
One lie merges with the next,and I pull it,
Tug,
Pull,
Stretch,
longer, thinner,strung like a stiff puppet
with too many hands
pulling.
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Whoβs pulling me?
Is it Geppetto?Jiminy?
Or someone darker,
Someone nameless?
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The strings tighten with each pull,
and I hear the awful creakof my wooden limbsβ
but I smile to please them,
hoping they wonβt notice
my stiffness,
my tightness.
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They believed me once.
But nowβthey see my nose,
the way it stretches before me
making a path of no return.
Perhaps theyβre lying, too.
(A lie defends another.)
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If I could stop thisβ
just tell the truth for one momentβ
but how can a puppet know the truth?
Whatβs real when all Iβve ever been is wood,
someone elseβs dream?
ππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊ
I wanted to be real,
but all Iβve made are tales,
so tall that, in the dark,
when my strings are still,
they cast their shadow on the wall.
Theyβre always thereβ
growing,
Growing.
Growing.
So huge Iβm lost beneath them.
ππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊ
Maybe when Iβm good,
Iβll wake up one fine day,
no strings, no woodβ
just the truth.
ππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊπΉπͺπππ€‘πΊ
Iβll be a boy, a real boy,
with a thumping heart
instead of splintering legs.
But until thenβ
one more tale,one more fib.
Just one more.
(It wouldnβt hurt, would it?)
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Comments (18)
Congratulations on your top story πππ
Congratulations on Top Story
Another interesting take inspired by a classic childhood character!
This is a poignant and insightful reimagining of Pinocchio's tale. Your words capture the character's internal struggle with identity and authenticity in a powerful way. The imagery of the growing nose and the relentless pull of the strings is particularly striking. You've managed to delve deep into the psychological complexities of the character, exploring themes of self-deception, societal expectations, and the longing for genuine connection. This poem is a testament to the enduring power of storytelling and the human condition.
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Congratulations on TSππ Fabulous job, I was right in his mind with him.
Beautiful Reggie. This story really brought tears to my eyes at the end. It's a wonderful tribute.
well done
Very deep. The frantic self questioning that every adult faces, let alone children.
Great
Love the form of this and the image
Back to say, "Congratulations on Top Story!!!"π₯°π₯°π₯°
This is very well done. Congrats on the TS.
This one is deliciously dark, like mahogany. Fitting, given the film!
I love this! The emojis also give it a nice touch. Well done!
Awesome stream of consciousness poem!!! Loving it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Oh, I do love this tale from poor little Pinnochioβs perspective β¦ wonderful Stream of Consciousness β
Will he ever learn? Great tale, Michelle.