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Wonder

A Poem

By AESPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Wonder
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We were wishes, welcomed warmly,

Wrapped while wailing.

Weaned, wobbling.

Walking, wandering.

Waiting, waiting.

When we’ve withered,

Will we worry we wasted

Wistful wants with work?

With worry?

Will we wish we’d waged war with weekday waiting?

When we’ve waned,

When we’re weightless wind-born whispers,

Will we wish we’d woven wonders

With wild wide-eyed whimsy?

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About the Creator

AES

NYC/Connecticut. I have degrees in Creative Writing and Anthropology; I write a lot of fantasy and spec fiction as well as the occasional stage play. When I'm not writing I'm eating candy and reading about shark attacks and plane crashes.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    I believe we will. Excellent piece.

  • Joelle E N3 years ago

    Incredible 🌌

  • WOW! What wonderful wordsmithing! Wishing well!

  • Lisa H3 years ago

    I love the pauses you created with the questions, and the repetition of the word "will"!

  • JBaz3 years ago

    Beautifully written and touching

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Wonderful!!!💖💖💕

  • Gerald Holmes3 years ago

    Wildly, wonderful writing!!!

  • Audrey Heitz3 years ago

    Love it, Ally! You are wonderful, witty and wise. ❤️

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