Withered
A haikuplet linked with Heather's Fecund Foilage
Photo by author
summer sun scorches
her fair countenance, thoughts melt
into mysteries
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the answers arrive,
cool as the crisp ocean breeze.
clarity in waves
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For Kenny's Haikuplet Chains challenge:
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Heather's original haikuplet:
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (27)
I love the sensory elements in your second haiku!! Great work, Cathy!!
This is lovely. Congratulations on the Top Story - it's well deserved.
I can’t even… this is absolutely amazing. Thank you for sharing.
Nice summer feelings there and I like that there is an answer too. I hope it's a good one.
This really makes me think of Summer with Monika Wonderful summer vibes
Congratulations on the great image and top story.
I loved it 💞
So well done! Great contribution!
the Top Story arrives, cool as the crisp ocean breeze. clarity in waves Congratulations! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations on Top Story! Lovely writing that touches me gently!
Beautiful!
Beautiful
Ohhh, so good, my friend! Those last lines🙌🏽✨Beautifully done! Off to read Heather’s piece. 💞
Oooh I'd forgotten about this challenge! I love this one.
I am totally lost here, what is a Haikuplet...i need to find out. And Fecund foliage...oh dear, much to go learn, but well said.
Ah!! I get it now!! How the chain works! Very well done!
Oh wow, I loveeeeee what you did here! Beauty photo as well!
Well done!💕
Deftly done!
Oh Cathy, excellent... really excellent! ❤️
This is so lovely! I think I find clarity in waves too...
Loved the twist you added to the last few lines!! Maybe I won't report you after all...hahahahaha!!
So gorgeous <3 Wonderful work! Others said it already, but loved the contrast so much <3
Wow this worked perfectly, Cathy!!! I loved the contrast, this is exactly what I need when it’s hot 🥵
The contrasting imagery and movement in your poem is wonderful.