Like the snow fell from the sky
we are in it, so deep
I save each tear drop you cry
to cast the wish that we keep
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When the star dust fell on us
to mark our path to the moon
It made a bond of love for just
both of us, me and you
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (5)
This was so mesmerising! Well done!
Every tear drop, to make wishes--I love it.
Beautiful!!! Loved it!!!
Love is special no matter how one sees it. Great work.
Who would have though that a poem that leads with snow could make me feel so warm and cozy. 😊 Love this simplicity!