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Wishes

And Snow Flakes

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Wishes
Photo by Damian McCoig on Unsplash

Like the snow fell from the sky

we are in it, so deep

I save each tear drop you cry

to cast the wish that we keep

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When the star dust fell on us

to mark our path to the moon

It made a bond of love for just

both of us, me and you

love poems

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    This was so mesmerising! Well done!

  • Every tear drop, to make wishes--I love it.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Beautiful!!! Loved it!!!

  • Mark Graham3 years ago

    Love is special no matter how one sees it. Great work.

  • Emma Kate Gee3 years ago

    Who would have though that a poem that leads with snow could make me feel so warm and cozy. 😊 Love this simplicity!

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