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Winter's Stillness Welcomes The Cosmo

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By KodahPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

The frost arrives on tiptoes

Stars are blinking when the silence speaks louder

A thin veil that stretches its fingers

across the earth

touching the sky

and pull it closer.

The ground holds its breath—

breath of winter that paints the sky

like shattered glass, awakening each star

visible in the language of the universe and cosmic rays.

The immense feels so infinite

feels like something we might understand

if only we could stand still long enough

to listen.

But there's something else—

a stillness

not silence anymore

but a hidden humming

the universe is speaking

not with words

but in the language of distances too far to measure

of time too wide to fold into minutes.

Winter's breeze watches the stars

those pinpricks of fire

that have burned for eons

their light is finding us only now.

This moment—

here, in the frost

it reminds us

how small and how old

we really are...

We are stardust.

The winter night

a moment

of vastness feels like a gift

a quiet hum that calls us back

to what we were

and what we might be—

and the space between~

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About the Creator

Kodah

- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical

~𝓢𝓽𝓸𝓻𝓲𝓮𝓼 𝓬𝓪𝓷 𝓫𝓮 𝓪 𝓵𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓵𝓮 𝓭𝓮𝓮𝓹~

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    So mysterious, I really enjoyed it. Well Doe!!

  • Ali SPabout a year ago

    This was so beautifully written Kodah! Your imagery is breath taking!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    This is so beautiful and so mysterious. I love it.

  • Carrie about a year ago

    Deep and beautiful! A worthy entry!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    I think this might be my favourite thing you’ve written. That first line - wow. Perfect!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Beautiful description!! Shatters glass and stardust. I love it❣️

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Wow! Incredibly written kodah😊✨

  • Whoaaaa, this was mindblowing! So deep and soooo beautifully penned! I freaking loved it!

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    This is quite exquisite, Kodah.

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    ⚡💙⚡

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