Wings at Dawn
A Winter Solstice Remembrance for My Dear Friend who passed on this morning.

On the longest night, the shortest day,
When shadows stretch and linger long,
You earned your wings at break of dawn,
The world grew still, then sang your song.
I walked the meadows near the river,
Where frost lay white upon the ground,
And felt you there in every breath of wind,
In every moment as it passed.
The solstice holds us at the turn,
Where darkness peaks and light returns,
A threshold crossed, a season changed,
Your spirit soars while my heart yearns.
The water flowed like tears
The willows bent in reverent prayer,
And though the earth spins cold and quiet,
I felt the warmth of you still there.
Dear friend, you chose this sacred day
When all the world pauses to reflect,
When nature bows to transformation,
Your timing, perfect and correct.
Last night I lit a Yule prayer's flame,
And whispered wishes to the dark,
That you might find your peaceful passage,
That grace might guide you to embark.
And so you did, at morning's breaking,
Released into the gentle light,
My prayer received, my wish granted,
You slipped beyond with ease and grace in sight.
The meadow held your memory close,
Each leaf and branch, each tree,
Reminded me that love transcends
This mortal plane where we can't be.
So on this solstice, dark and bright,
I honor both the grief and grace,
The longest night before the dawn,
Your wings, your flight, your resting place.
The light will grow from this day forth,
And so will all the love you've sown,
Until we meet in meadows far beyond,
Where neither of us walks alone.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.



Comments (7)
My deepest condolences. Your tribute is well-wrought and deeply moving.
Beautiful.
Tim, I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful tribute.
Tim, a touching beautiful poem for your dear friend who passed away this morning.
What a gorgeous tribute, Tim! Sorry 4 your loss!
🙏🏾 So sorry for your loss Tim. Beautiful words.
Sorry for your loss Tim. This was beautiful, heartfelt and eloquent. Gave me a lump in my throat. I'll keep you iny thoughts and prayers.