The storm began,
In the dark of night,
While the people slept,
Oblivious.
The weather report had
Said snow;
But then, again,
Weathermen always exaggerated,
So people didn’t believe them any more.
“We don’t get snow like that here!”
The birds knew.
They gathered in the spruce trees,
Puffing their feathers for warmth,
Until they looked like
Tennis balls
With tails.
The deer knew.
Wraiths at the edge of the woods,
Hunkering down in the brush,
Prepared to wait it out.
The rodents knew.
Voles: chubby sausages, with short, stubby legs.
Deer mice: snow-white bellies, tiny scurrying feet.
Squirrels: wrapped warmly in their fluffy tails.
Even the chipmunks, curled in their tree-hollows, dreaming snowy dreams.
Finally,
The people woke.
They looked out their windows,
Wide-eyed,
Stunned
At the transformation
Of their world.
Everything buried
Beneath a
Thick,
Unstoppable,
Unrecognizable,
Icily foreign
Carpet of white.
And they knew
Fear.
About the Creator
Laura DePace
Retired teacher, nature lover, aspiring writer driven by curiosity and “What if?” I want to share my view of the fascinating, complex world of nature. I also love creating strong characters and interesting worlds for them to live in.
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I love the way you described the animals, especially the part that refers to birds as "tennis balls with tails." 🐦