Where My Mind Wanders
"In case you ever foolishly forget, I am never not thinking of you." - Virginia Woolf
Did you know that the world is stained?
It is stained the most wonderful hue
Stained deeply and forever with the memory of you
Tell me if you’ve noticed my eyes wander
Returning constantly, near or far,
Again and again to where you are
Can you count for me the time
That ticks away between breaths in and out?
I know not what these moments are
Oh, but I know that they shout,
Never-ending and increasingly loud, your name
About the Creator
Lucia B.
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Such a beautiful and wondrous love poem! Could definitely sense the emotion throughout.
Wow. This was a well deserved placement in the competition! I’m excited to read more of your poety, you write beautifully ✨🙏
Wow, this flowed so nicely despite being an acrostic (which is rather challenging). You depicted my favorite type of distraction. Being enamored with another human being. You make it look easy, but I know it took serious skill to create this.
Makes distractions look beautiful. The stains are beautiful,
This is breathtaking. Superb.
Stunning work. Congrats!
This was my favourite
Absolutely beautiful, Lucia! Congrats on your feature and runner up!
Congratulations. A well-deserved winner.