Where Did You Go, Dad?
A poem about life as a young black male.

Where did you go, Dad? I looked for you
Throughout Kilburn High Road and Shoot-Up Hill.
Did I bite the dust? Ha, no, but I bit a bullet or two.
Oh, look, blood! I did not notice it spill.
I could have died, Dad. Did I not tell you?
He told me, “Don't run, don't run,” but I did.
I remember his machete, how it shone white and blue,
Moonlit in midnight, in the shrubs, I hid.
Inner demons, you know they lie
As you do not whisper the truth.
Are you proud of me? I picked up a notebook, not a knife.
Oh, yeah, Dad, do you remember this moment from my youth?
Mum braided your hair, then she braided mine,
Then you shaved yours off and, like Father, like Son, I shaved mine.
About the Creator
Peter L. Pinnock @mummysboyvegan @thepiedpiperofhampden
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So heartbreaking! I hope you're okay🥹