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When We're Gone From Here

Where Will We Be?

By Dana CrandellPublished 25 days ago 1 min read
When We're Gone From Here
Photo by Rohan Solankurkar on Unsplash

When the dust of our existence

Is naught but a memory

And this world repairs the damage

Done to her by you and me,

Where will we be?

Will we watch from some encampment

On that tiny moon up there?

Or will we be out in the void

In search of a world, where

We'll learn to share?

Perhaps we will have fallen prey

To our hate and greed, at last

And been reduced to particles

In a great, atomic blast.

“Well, that was fast!”

Ah, then again, we might ascend

To a pristine, peaceful place

That waits for us, with marble halls

Where there's no creed nor race,

Nothing but Grace.

Alas, my mind does wander thus,

In these quiet times, despite

Herculean effort by myself,

But since it's long past light,

I'll say, “Goodnight!”

***

Man, those thoughts before I turn out the light and go to sleep just go wherever they want! Thanks for reading my musings.

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About the Creator

Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.

My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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  • Aarsh Malik24 days ago

    I appreciate the contemplative, gentle tone that carries throughout, balancing gravity with a subtle warmth. The closing lines, “I’ll say, ‘Goodnight!’” provide a comforting and intimate resolution.

  • Tiffany Gordon24 days ago

    Glorious work Dana!

  • Andrea Corwin 24 days ago

    I'm not reincarnating again. Nice job.

  • "Where there's no creed nor race, Nothing but Grace." This would be such a wonderful place to be. Loved your poem!

  • Beautifully written 👏 💙

  • JBaz24 days ago

    A sharp reminder for us, not only this time of the year but always. We all have a choice to make …what will be ours

  • Judey Kalchik 24 days ago

    This time of year, especially, leads me to thoughts of ending, struggle, wonderings. Thank you for giving voice to some of those thoughts. It gives me comfort to know that I am not alone.

  • great thoughts, I lean toward the latter of the choices

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