When we danced
Silently...Then out loud.

I remember a time when we danced until dawn peeked shyly above the distant sky
inquisitively...the approaching morning eavesdropped upon what shadows reveal when it tiptoes in
the horizon Blushing as we spun to one last heartsong
and laughter sewing stars into the sky as our bare feet
traced rhythms on moonlit cobblestones amid gentle sighs.
The music wasn't born from strings,
but from the pulse between your smile and mine,
each gesture a swinging musical note
in the breeze of passing time.
Around us, shadows held their breath,
watching joy blooming from night into morn
and sunlight, not wishing to disturb our silent tango
approached tentatively...shy as a secret lover,
peeking in with golden fingertips.
We didnβt pause or stop
not when the crickets chorused their applause,
not when the owls tucked their wisdom back in feathers
we danced until reality burned our skin with the grinning sun
and laughter blistered delight on our shoulders
like badges from dreams too stubborn to fade.
The cobblestones shone like glassy-eyed dots,
slick with morning dew,
and your shadow clung to mine
ink still bleeding from the stars.
Let the sun gloat as it halts our footsteps
let morning crow victory over moon-touched hearts
weβll still be there, flickering between the sunbeams,
two dancers shimmering in morning's twilight, fading like fog into day's embrace.

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Now, two twilight storytellers sit, rocking gently as the sky leans in to listen.
Their silhouettes echo years of laughter, loss, and stubborn rebellion.

two silhouettes forever rehearsing
the nights that they still danced
Daring to outlast dawn.
About the Creator
Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.
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Comments (18)
Beautiful story I enjoyed this πππ
π Beautiful use of imagery and personification ... LOVE THIS!!πππ
Beautiful love poem!!! β€οΈβ€οΈπ Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Thoroughly loved this love poem! Felt so genuine and carefree! I could definitely sense the emotion throughout as the two lovers danced.
"we danced until reality burned our skin with the grinning sun" ^This line right here is GORGEOUS. I felt that in my chest and was instantly taken back to times I watched the sunrise with old loves. Thank you for a great poem :)
This was so dreamy and really felt good to read. Memories will continue the dance even when arthritis slows the real dancers down. Lovely work, Antoni!
Antoni, this is superb poetry! π₯° So many stand-out lines, but this particular one melted my heart: "not when the owls tucked their wisdom back in feathers." Congratulations on your top story!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
This is just to blame beautiful. Great job on this TS.
Antoni, this is so awesome. Everything about songs to the soul of the reader. Congratulations on a well deserved Top Story
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There are no words, except for beautiful, to describe your poem. A well deserved Top Story
Beautiful poem and congratulations on your Top story!
This was such a beautiful happy poem. I'm about to go to bed and this was a great one to end my day on!
This was absolutely wonderful and soooo beautifully written! Loved it so much!
Your old soul is showing through young eyes. This was a lovely bit of nostalgia.
Antoni Deleon for the win! πͺπΎπ₯π Gorgeous, epic & uber-romantic! Get it gurl!
Beautiful imagery