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When the Words Leave

(this bit is hard - if i had an extra line it would be in the poem.....)

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

i don’t have enough for a book

but i think i could manage a short story

i just wanted to find more of myself

i was never loading for glory

some will find a peace in my words

some will always find war

what’s the point of being nil all

if no one’s keeping the score

what’s the point of compensating

for a condition previously defined

committed to paper or a silicon wafer

only then do the words leave my mind

there is no less

there is no loss

there is nothing to mourn or grieve

this is what happens

this is when the words leave

when i think of all the clever things

i’ve ever thought or uttered aloud

wish i’d had could have had the ability then

to save them to the cloud

should have had that piece of paper

should have had that pen

those words could have been saved for ever

so then i could have shared them again

there is no half

there is no full

there is nothing up my sleeve

this is simply my process

this is when the words leave

got just enough for an anecdote

peppered with humorous lies

my intent is not to obfuscate

i have nothing left to hide

i just twist and i squeeze

i prod and i poke

it might be insightful

it might be a joke

there is no happy

there is no sad

there is just what i believe

this is just how it happens

this is when the words leave

inspirational

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    I love this one

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    I think this one might be my favourite 😁 How did I miss it until now??

  • Mackenzie Davis3 years ago

    At the first instance of “this is when the words leave”, I smiled and savored the way you wrote the line and how it got to the core of your poem. That it repeated, icing on the cake. This is a fun exploration into those inopportune moments when an idea strikes and there is no way to capture it. Happens to me all the time! I really liked the pace and energy of the piece, the rhyme and rhythm too. 👏👏

  • Test3 years ago

    Brenton, this was a really beautiful piece about self discovery. My favourite line is “ i just wanted to find more of myself”, I love it because I feel like that’s what writing does to us. It helps us discover more from ourselves and heal from our past. This poem was so relatable and heartfelt! You really did a beautiful job of capturing what it feels like to be a writer! 😊

  • Well.

  • Moon Desert3 years ago

    I love this poem! To tell the truth, everyone has idea for a book. The biggest obstacle I find is to find the right time to write. The idea itself is not enough, it’s the flow and the right words that write books.

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