i'm the guy that
would get a uni degree
just to make a point
just to make you see
to show you with clarity
what you lack to see
you're completely fucking wrong
and will always be
but this glorious vision of yours
won't let you see
won’t let you see
...internally
you don't know
what you've lost
you count the battles
not what they cost
you ignore the values
chasing the price
you've mistaken a virtue
and created a vice
but this glorious vision of yours
won't let you see
won’t let you see
...internally
every time i see
a glimmer of hope
your stupid mouth
it betrays you
every single word
you utter
makes me scream
silently inside
but this glorious vision of yours
won’t let you see
won’t let you see
...internally
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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The Ritual of Winter Challenge Winners
Welcome to the Winners Announcement for The Ritual of Winter challenge. This prompt focused on winter rituals and the meaning that settles into them over time. The top pieces stay grounded in ordinary acts and repeated routines, letting winter shape the work through pace, attention, and restraint.
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That was just awesome song! I loved it! I would compare this ‘seeing internally’ to a psychiatrist who can prescribe a medication, but he or she knows nothing about what’s happening inside, even after studying and practicing for bloody long years. That’s just mad. And he/she is taking money for it to ‘help’ (at least the medication supposed to). What a nonsense, right? I feel like a slave sometimes, stipulated on the price sold by them.
Yes!!