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When the Knife is Pulled from the Wound

Another poem about the friend who left

By Poppy Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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I miss you as

A broken bone misses

The impact

I cry for you like

The wound seeps blood

When the knife is pulled out

Screaming for freedom

But mourning the cage

You needed me as

A drowning person needs

Somebody to die beside them

As a gash needs a bandage

But only until it heals

You left me like

A butterfly abandoning

Its cocoon

Reaching for happiness

Not caring how it got there

I break for you

The way the sun

Always rises

(I need to break for something)

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    Such powerful imagery. I'd pick a favorite but I'm not sure how I would choose. Each hits me in its own way.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    You needed me as A drowning person needs Somebody to die beside them Ooh these lines are striking a chord. Nice work.

  • As a gash needs a bandage but only until it heals. That line hit me so hard! Your poem was so emotional and relatable!

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