Dreaming of developing a delightful draft.
Involving an inspirational insight
Sketching sensational scenes
Thought-provoking tragic tale
Revising for realistic resolution
Adding astounding adjectives and adverbs
Creating concrete conclusion
Trimming and tightening the theme
Improving to ignore insipid ideas
Obliterating obscure obstacles for…
New, Note-worthy narrative.
About the Creator
Iris Harris
An aspiring novelist. I enjoy writing ghost, horror, and drama. Occassionally, I dabble with some essays. You can find more of my work with the link below:
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
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Niche topic & fresh perspectives
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts6 days ago in Longevity
Comments (13)
But not TOO many adverbs, right 🧐
This is so wonderful! So well thought-out!
Great job hearted and subscribed! I edit more than I write lol
Except , I do this a few times over. Great job
Amazing poem; you have described the process with such elegance. Lovely! :)
Well done!
Great job. This is wonderful.
❤️📝Great job on this magnificent piece!
Great poem. Love the alliteration.
Splendid!!! Loved it!!!💖💖💕
This is stunning! Great entry, Iris
So freaking good. Amazing writing ability.
👏👏👏Oooh nice alliteration in the lines!! My fav was “improving to ignore insipid ideas” 😁