What was that rhyme again?

Be careful of what you pick up. #MotherCombs'LimerickChallenge

By Thavien YliasterPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read

What was that rhyme again?

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Jack saw a snake with colorful bands

He picked it up with his bare hands

Then it bit his finger

And he felt something lingered

Till he collapsed and could no longer stand

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Thavien's Token: "This limerick has been constructed for Mother Combs' Limerick Challenge."

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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Cathy holmes2 years ago
Haha. Jack's a dumbass.
Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago
Hahahahahhahahahahaha! I suppose he didn't know that not all that glitters is gold 🤣🤣🤣
Babs Iverson2 years ago
Fantastic Limerick!!! Impressively written!!!know I didn't like snakes!!! Left a heart!!!❤️❤️💕
Mother Combs2 years ago
Great limerick
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)2 years ago
I know why he couldn't stand -😂👀👌🐍

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