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What the Soil Remembers

On Footsteps That Do Not Fade

By Rebecca A Hyde GonzalesPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
What the Soil Remembers
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"The wind paused to hear you breathe. The soil remembered your footsteps."

The wind still pauses where your breath once lay,

the soil remembers every step you made.

I carry silence as my vow today.

The trees grew still before the words could say,

their roots already mourning what decayed.

The wind still pauses where your breath once lay.

I kneel where shrubs once marked our hidden way,

each leaf a witness, each branch unafraid.

I carry silence as my vow today.

Your pen was seed; its ink still feeds the clay,

each page a garden that your hand portrayed.

The wind still pauses where your breath once lay.

I read the journals, hear the margins pray,

each line a blessing, though the voice has strayed.

I carry silence as my vow today,

the wind still pauses where your breath once lay.

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About the Creator

Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales

I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.

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  • Martina Franklin Poole about a month ago

    You got the form and syllables just right, and it makes it flow so well. I can just feel the regret and sadness when I read it.

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