I observed you.
You gaze at me.
You keep staring.
What do you see in me?
What are you searching for?
I sense you; I can tell.
The feeling is deep.
Deep into your heart.
You are trying to get something.
Something you think that I can provide.
What are you thinking?
As you continue to gaze at me,
If you dig deeply enough,
You'll see it right through me.
Look into my eyes.
How are you feeling?
What's on your mind?
About Me_
Do you understand how it feels?
To look for love.
That feeling you're having now
Is the one.
You are looking for love.
You hope to receive it.
Continue staring at me.
You will see my thoughts.
You will understand how I feel.
You will stop looking and live freely.
About the Creator
Gloria Penelope
Every creative piece is just me, telling a story. Enjoy!
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Comments (3)
Oh, if they keep looking at you, they will find love? You’ll find it together??💗💗
This was absolutely wonderful! Loved this poem!
Your writing beautifully captures the often chaotic and multifaceted nature of our internal dialogues. The way you describe the interplay between our conscious and subconscious minds, and how they influence our actions and perceptions, is both relatable and enlightening. It’s clear that you have a profound understanding of the human psyche, and your ability to articulate these concepts is truly commendable. I was particularly struck by your reflections on how societal expectations and personal experiences shape our thoughts. Your observations serve as a poignant reminder of the importance of self-awareness and mindfulness in navigating our mental landscapes. The blend of personal anecdotes and universal truths in your piece creates a powerful narrative that speaks to a wide audience. Thank you for sharing your wisdom and creativity through your writing. Your piece has not only provided me with a deeper understanding of my own thoughts but has also inspired me to embrace the complexity of my mind with greater acceptance and curiosity. I look forward to reading more of your work and continuing to explore the rich tapestry of ideas you so skillfully weave together.