I wanted you to save me, but I couldn’t let you save me, because to let you save me, meant - I had to let you in.
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In to let you see me, but I couldn’t let you see me, because if you really saw me - You’d be underneath my skin
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Part of my existence inside my own decisions, driving my souls ambitions - till every part of me was gone.
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Which in turn makes me connected, until I was rejected, leaving my heart and soul dissected - and in need of being saved.
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Does any part of your world stop when I approach?
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no?
I didn’t think so
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (7)
Good GOLLY MISS MOLLY! I absolutely LOVED this! WOOTING the WOOTIEST WOOT I can WOOT! Phenomenal writing Kelli!
gorgeous work!
Well written and very thought provoking. I like it.
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Wow. Great job, flows perfectly
Very good! An enjoyable and thought-provoking read! 💕
Wow. This is going to resignate with alot of people. It's very well written as well!