For those who don't know a haiku is a short-form poem with only three lines. The first and third lines must have five syllables and the second must have seven syllables.
Feel it in the wind
Gentle hug like a blanket
A cool breeze to touch
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Feel it in the leaves
Change is not too far away
See it in gold flecks
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I welcome the change
With open arms of intrigue
What is to come next?
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I feel the wind blow
Upon my face, I breathe in
The chance to be free
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A chance to be free
From nature's heat and sunburns
Clouds are lovely friends
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Feel it in the wind
Whispers of the coming days
I am ready now
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Sarah Loyd
I love movies, music, TV, and all things entertaining. I also love to write poetry. Follow me on X @melodies_marie. You can also find me on Pinterest @sloydmarie.
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Comments (7)
Beautiful! I love your choice of simple but descriptive imagery! I love the image created by your sister too!
Enjoyed your poetry - Haiku's 💖
Loved and subscribed! Can't wait to read more of your work! Consider having a look at money and if you like it, please subscribe... there's a lot to come!
Luv'd your Haikus!!
What a lovely series and the image is beautiful too
Fresh and beautiful...!!!
Beautiful!!! Loving it!!!