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What Feels Like the End

One of my friends

By TestPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

Motorcycle chain broke

made him go to work 1 hour late on the first day

He was fired from his job on the first day

No way out, went back to the country

To grow bean sprouts to sell, currently

Income 100,000 baht per month

One of my seniors

Broke up with his ex-girlfriend who abused him for 10 years

The last time, he broke his arm

Went to the police station and met

A single police officer who loves his family

They dated and got married, currently

He is a police officer with a lovely child

Another person I know

He was evicted from his place of employment for 10 years

The owner of the place was going to sell the building

He was depressed, couldn't think of what to do

Regular customers heard the news

He told him to go sell near his house, it sold better than before

Currently has 4-5 branches, income in the millions

No matter what you are going through

No matter how bad it is, the first thing you need to know

Is...it will pass, everything

And everything that happens to us is always good

If the chain broke, he wouldn't be late for work

He wouldn't be able to go home, be with his family

Have a new job, good income

Not being hurt by his ex

Not meeting good people Who really loves us

Not being evicted

Not thinking of expanding

Not finding good opportunities

Until we can expand the branch Like this

No matter what we lose

We will get new things that are better than before

Or at least not staying in the same place

Life is full of tests

To prove that we are worthy

Of big prizes

Like me

The old house is not broken, I probably won't

Get a new house that is better than before

I probably won't have a new society

Everything that happens in our life...is always good

If we look at the good side It's up to us

Which side we choose to look at

Thank you for coming ...

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