Trigger Warning: Graphic imagery
Wendy Darling's Grown Up
the clock ticks faster and faster in the crocodile
as he devours the girl’s white underwear
she writhes at his bite—
prolonged, rolling, white-burning pain—
twisting in her stained sheets
as Peter Pan cackles at her, fading
before the face of Big Ben
the clock ticks within her,
with each cry and story told,
each infant’s laugh and fairy born,
slower, slower, slower
until torn scarlet garments lie
abandoned on the floor
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Stephanie Hoogstad
With a BA in English and MSc in Creative Writing, writing is my life. I have edited and ghost written for years with some published stories and poems of my own.
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Comments (5)
Descriptive and melancholy!!!❤️❤️💕
This is great, Stephanie. Powerful imagery. Well done
Way to twist a piece of collective imagery!
Tremendous layered wording and phrasing. I loved how you lean into Peter Pan energy. Brilliant turn of phrase. Hard reading, but important.
Some powerful imagery and great images to go with it. Excellent work worthy of a Top Story.