
My original characters Barbara and Connie by Carol Makky
aching for your waterfall,
Your hips glide fast air,
Inferno, soft earth
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (5)
Lovely.
Absolutely stunning. There are so many emotions in these words. This poem has so much texture. ❤️
Sooooo happy for this Haiku based on Barbara and Connie! It was so deep!
Great haiku. I felt very intimate.
Sweet, nicely done Haiku.