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Waterfall

Haiku

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
My original characters Barbara and Connie by Carol Makky

aching for your waterfall,

Your hips glide fast air,

Inferno, soft earth

heartbreaklove poems

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • Esala Gunathilake2 years ago

    Lovely.

  • sleepy drafts3 years ago

    Absolutely stunning. There are so many emotions in these words. This poem has so much texture. ❤️

  • Sooooo happy for this Haiku based on Barbara and Connie! It was so deep!

  • Colt Henderson3 years ago

    Great haiku. I felt very intimate.

  • Sweet, nicely done Haiku.

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