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Water Star

Haiku

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
By Patrick Nguyen

salubrious, water star

Your tears welcome firestorm,

breeze, leaves quake

surreal poetrylove poems

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Stephen Kramer Avitabile3 years ago

    Your use of words, even when so few words, still so impactful. Hearted and subscribed too!

  • This was so stunningly gorgeous!

  • JBaz3 years ago

    As usual very creative and lovely

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