Let’s walk on the breeze until our feet float free.
Taste candy clouds as we sail on by.
Let’s sing with the wind in harmonious key,
And take in the scents of the fresh autumn sky.
Let’s forget all our worries and watch our imaginations fly.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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I really like "feet float free" Cathy, and the feel of this reminds of the Sky-Ku idea!
brilliant piece
Yes, let's!! Simply beautiful :)
Superbly done
Cathy!! I'm in love with the serenity this piece brings!! 💚
This lovely sensory poem reads like a song sounds. Beautifully done.
Gorgeous, as always, my friend! Just stunning!
Love this so much! Whimsical perfection!
Its quite invigorating, sometimes, to read something whimsically positive
I can feel the wind, cod and fresh in my chest and my cheeks creaking 😁 The picture is perfectly chosen as well 😁
Oh, yes. Liberating! Loved this, Cathy! Like Peter Pan!
Candy clouds made me think of the unicorn story/poem that you wrote, lol. Loved your poem!
Inspiring!!!❤️❤️💕
This is wonderful, Cathy. I especially love Taste candy clouds as we sail on by!
A carefree take on the senses. Going for a walk now!